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My micpass verse

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My micpass verse

Postby Infliction » Oct 24th, '06, 06:41

Ayyo, I can rap about crooks and still rhyme wit integrity
I could read a fuckin' book and rhyme out the directory
Quit second guessin' me, I'll cutchu' up like a vesectomy
Dont mess wit me, cuz when I beef I let my anger get the best of me
You're temptin' me, and that's somethin' you really dont wanna do
Cuz in ya head you thinkin' im soft but immabout to surprise you
Sock you in the mouth then take outcha' whole crew
Leave a hole in you, and not just in ya ego but ya skull too


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Postby lenaespiritodefogo » Oct 24th, '06, 10:58

i like it, really good plaspp ;) keep up the good work :happy:
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Postby Speech » Oct 24th, '06, 14:35

damn i like this homie

mine is wack compared to yours

good work
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Postby Infliction » Oct 25th, '06, 01:07

nah man urs wat hot, for real. thanks for the feedback everyone
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Postby Infliction » Oct 27th, '06, 13:05

any more feedback?
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