some thoughts

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Oct 24th, '06, 18:32

having wrote anything long ,a spend spare time wit da bong ,
works taking its toll but am reaching ma goal ,
am stacking up the cash as a puff puff pass ,
but when ya run puff puff yer last , and the cops cuff cuff yer ass,
it wont be long till yer in the cell a fucking living hell,
and when ya yell no one can tell ,while im in the ritz hotel,
actually its a 2 for 1 motel but what the hell ,
ma rapping styles change funny of the brain,
actaully its lame but a still claim the benifits,
coz im in a whellchair didnt a tell a took a fit n fell,
smashed ma head so hard it hardly blead,
but it led to a bulled shed witch peirced me red,
so now a do a wheelie naked in the street,
coz i also chopped ma arm off a cant fire heat,
am a fucking masta spita , hit a disabled guy widya,
im taking the pissa now missa, coz im wacker than chrissa,

jsut posting something for the sake of it

feedback

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 18:37

bar thats great!!!

thanx 4 postin it b4 i had 2 leave again!

but yeah its great!!! keep it up ...

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Oct 24th, '06, 18:39

Rae wrote:bar thats great!!!

thanx 4 postin it b4 i had 2 leave again!

but yeah its great!!! keep it up ...

lol thx

by **C-Game** » Oct 24th, '06, 18:46

Rae wrote:bar thats great!!!

thanx 4 postin it b4 i had 2 leave again!

but yeah its great!!! keep it up ...

bar has leveled it up very FAR
nice stuff

and rae???????

oh my god rae pls tell me where are u going
im sad coz u are going without my knowin
it hurts like gettin kicked up in the groin
its warm out side but my heart is cold and snowin

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 18:50

cgame wrote:
Rae wrote:bar thats great!!!

thanx 4 postin it b4 i had 2 leave again!

but yeah its great!!! keep it up ...

bar has leveled it up very FAR
nice stuff

and rae???????

oh my god rae pls tell me where are u going
im sad coz u are going without my knowin
it hurts like gettin kicked up in the groin
its warm out side but my heart is cold and snowin

awww i love it! ur sooooo sweet!

by **C-Game** » Oct 24th, '06, 18:57

Rae wrote:
cgame wrote:
Rae wrote:bar thats great!!!

thanx 4 postin it b4 i had 2 leave again!

but yeah its great!!! keep it up ...

bar has leveled it up very FAR
nice stuff

and rae???????

oh my god rae pls tell me where are u going
im sad coz u are going without my knowin
it hurts like gettin kicked up in the groin
its warm out side but my heart is cold and snowin

awww i love it! ur sooooo sweet!

OMG she said im sweet im over my head
did i hear her ryt ... of course i aint deaf
but damn im postin in BARS created thread
rae i think bar is P.Oed i think im dead
if he sees this there will be a blood shed
and i wld be in coma on a hospital bed
:stretcher:

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 19:03

cgame wrote:
Rae wrote:
cgame wrote:
Rae wrote:bar thats great!!!

thanx 4 postin it b4 i had 2 leave again!

but yeah its great!!! keep it up ...

bar has leveled it up very FAR
nice stuff

and rae???????

oh my god rae pls tell me where are u going
im sad coz u are going without my knowin
it hurts like gettin kicked up in the groin
its warm out side but my heart is cold and snowin

awww i love it! ur sooooo sweet!

OMG she said im sweet im over my head
did i hear her ryt ... of course i aint deaf
but damn im postin in BARS created thread
rae i think bar is P.Oed i think im dead
if he sees this there will be a blood shed
and i wld be in coma on a hospital bed

no your not deaf,
you heard me right,
but we betta stop before bar wants to fight,
so we betta run outta his sight,
and after we're gone,
we can go get our freak on!

by **C-Game** » Oct 24th, '06, 19:07

Rae wrote:
cgame wrote:
Rae wrote:
cgame wrote:
Rae wrote:bar thats great!!!

thanx 4 postin it b4 i had 2 leave again!

but yeah its great!!! keep it up ...

bar has leveled it up very FAR
nice stuff

and rae???????

oh my god rae pls tell me where are u going
im sad coz u are going without my knowin
it hurts like gettin kicked up in the groin
its warm out side but my heart is cold and snowin

awww i love it! ur sooooo sweet!

OMG she said im sweet im over my head
did i hear her ryt ... of course i aint deaf
but damn im postin in BARS created thread
rae i think bar is P.Oed i think im dead
if he sees this there will be a blood shed
and i wld be in coma on a hospital bed

no your not deaf,
you heard me right,
but we betta stop before bar wants to fight,
so we betta run outta his sight,
and after we're gone,
we can go get our freak on!

yea yea

yea bar is strapped up ready to fyt
ill go for his throat u go or the lights
that will be an advantage it will hinder his sight
and afterwards lets have a nighty night

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 19:18

i would help you go for his throat,
but i dont rock that way on tha boat,
bar is a wicked good scottish rapper,
and his rhymes will only grow better and better,
so how could i help you destroy,
on of the best rappers in tha world,
but we could skip that and have a fun nite,
trust my i dont bite,
you'll get used to it threw-out tha nite,

by **Kez** » Oct 24th, '06, 20:54

Why are we rhyming on Bar's thread?
I'm sure he dosen't look no more so it's prolly already half dead!

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(Here i say half as harf so don't say that don't rhyme)

Anyway Bar i thought it was great. Specially the wheelie bit