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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 24th, '06, 21:36

Chorus -

its groupie fucking
there aint no ducking
wit dis groupie fucking
they keep on sucking

its groupie fucking
there aint no ducking
wit dis groupie fucking
they keep on sucking

Verse - 1 ( bar )

they come up in the club like how you doin,
im like bitch on yer knees just start chewing,
then a start spewing out some white shit,
they plastered to the wall you aint seen nothing like it ,
aint no point tryna fight it , just give in ,
you still win , a groupie like yer next of kin,
but wait listen up a second,
this girl dont leave you alone , shes never of the phone,
this groupies cool like the ice on chrome,
this is a unknown type , she got hype,
im like, yo girl im falling for you
a cant fall for a groupie what the fuck imma do ,
me and you , the star and the groupie,
thats mroe fucked up than madonna and britney,
anywae bitch enjoy the ride and sing wit me.


(Chorus)

its incomplete by the way


:whistle:

and imma get a special guest :shifty:

but psoted this anywae :whistle:

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Postby yoshi » Oct 24th, '06, 21:43

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

special guest :whistle: btw. verse 1 is the shit :8)
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 21:52

that was sick bar!

keep it up ... :wave:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 24th, '06, 21:56

thank you ladies :worship:

@ yosh , do you knwo who the guest is :shifty:
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Postby yoshi » Oct 24th, '06, 21:57

^ yeah, i do.. :whistle: lmao :sweating:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 24th, '06, 22:49

G_killa wrote:verse is cool

sorry but the hook is crap :sweating:


yup i did copy the style from laffy taffy :laughing:

lol yeh i know ill sort the hook out when imma record it lol :smoking:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 24th, '06, 22:58

G_killa wrote:
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G_killa wrote:verse is cool

sorry but the hook is crap :sweating:


yup i did copy the style from laffy taffy :laughing:

lol yeh i know ill sort the hook out when imma record it lol :smoking:


tis great otherwise tho man ....plus hooks take time to adapt to

btw where my verse maaaaafuckaaa :angry:

lol


i recorded it tonight :smoking: then i tried to clean it up and fucked it up , then i thought kool ill ask you to clean it up and i normalize it to get it loud and noticed that if i normalized it 50% i could hear the beat in the background , i went nuts for bout 15 minutes , then i clicked on that i had my headphones at full power , then i noticed a little thing on the ear of them for volume control then i got it all set up and noticed the time , then i went nuts for about 15 minutes , then i calmed down ,

if i dont have it by monday shoot me :smoking:
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Postby C-Game » Oct 27th, '06, 17:33

hmmmmmm groupie fuckin :8)
how abt twin fuckin
yo bar work on that he he
nice lyrics bar
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