What If (Full Song)

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 28th, '06, 17:21

(talking)
What if I were to die
What If I were to commit suicide
What if I were to put my life to an end

Verse 1:
What if I were to put a gun to my head and end it today
Yeah It was a hell of a run but the depression got in the way
End it all that quickly cause to me my life

by **Marth** » Oct 28th, '06, 17:42

it's good, bit short, you need the verses 2 times long as that

by **ThomasAguanis** » Oct 28th, '06, 17:51

great work man. probably the best I've seen from you. Audio should be great depending on the beat but I'm sure you have a good one picked out. Keep it up man. you're improving at a good rate.

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 28th, '06, 18:07

thanks for the feed marth i try to make my verses long but it don't always work out lol

thanks for the feedback tom and yeah i agree this is my best song ever to lol

by **sinemm** » Oct 28th, '06, 18:53

really touched me

its really nice.. liked it alot...

n u mentioned bout the things sometimes i think bout in the song..

congs

by **vermin** » Oct 28th, '06, 18:54

ur a fuckin genius man! :confusion:

that stuff is incredible!!!!

nice job!!!

by **Inzanity** » Oct 28th, '06, 19:01

I'm glad u finished it it's really dope man nice job

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 28th, '06, 19:02

sinemm wrote:really touched me its really nice.. liked it alot...

n u mentioned bout the things sometimes i think bout in the song..

congs

thanks for the feed

glad you ain't thinking those things anymore

vermin wrote:ur a fuckin genius man!

that stuff is incredible!!!!

nice job!!!

wow thanks alot man

EmptyPromises wrote:I'm glad u finished it it's really dope man nice job

yep same here lol thanks for the feed

by **Slimm** » Oct 28th, '06, 19:44

real nice man..
Way better than most of the wannabe gangster nursery rhymes I find here, keep it up

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 28th, '06, 20:00

Slimm wrote:real nice man..
Way better than most of the wannabe gangster nursery rhymes I find here, keep it up

lol thanks man

@ the wannabe ganster nursery rhyme thing lmao

but yeah thanks for the feedback

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Oct 28th, '06, 20:12

finsihed reading it quick lol the hooks are awesome man and the verses are some of you best writing , hopefulyl if you spit them good tid be a great song , keep it up man

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 28th, '06, 20:15

Bar wrote:finsihed reading it quick lol the hooks are awesome man and the verses are some of you best writing , hopefulyl if you spit them good tid be a great song , keep it up man

thankd for the feedback man lol and i WILL keep it up lol :happy:

by **Inches** » Oct 29th, '06, 01:50

its good man
you defiinitley inproving
im waiting on the audio

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 29th, '06, 01:52

inches2010 wrote:its good man
you defiinitley inproving
im waiting on the audio

cool man thanks alot for the feedback man

yeah audio will be released when i put out the cd

by **Inches** » Oct 29th, '06, 01:57

steverocks88 wrote:
inches2010 wrote:its good man
you defiinitley inproving
im waiting on the audio

cool man thanks alot for the feedback man

yeah audio will be released when i put out the cd

whens that gonna be?

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