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First Audio Song

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First Audio Song

Postby .Giorgo. » Oct 29th, '06, 23:20

I'm gonna work on th walls. The plan was me and Steverocks, but i'm gonna record it. My first Audio Song than, gonna buy my mic in a week so,, then the song is done.

Verse 01

Do you still love me ? Or is that a lie ?
I'm here, close to you, but i still cry.
I can't touch ya, i can't feel ya beautiful-body.
Yeah, it's happened, no way back,am i now fuckin'-shoddy ?
No. I'm the same person, only behind iron-bars.
I can't go home.. i even can't drive with our nice-cars.

These fuckin' walls keep me away from you.
I wanna breakout.. But how ? I don't have a clue.
But girl, never leave me. You're the only thing i have.
You're everything to me, but i can't do anything for ya.
These bars are between us, but hey, it's only more 1 long-year.
I'm locked up here, but one day. I will appear.

I want to kiss you, these 2 minutes aren't enough.
I want enough time with ya, This time is rough.
Our kid, i can't see him, can't see his first steps.
The only thing i did was defend us, but that where mistakes.
The world is hard to us, i even can't give you a birthday-present.
Common' u don't deserve this, u deserve more. That's an big-argument.

Would you wtite back to my loveletters ? Or not ?
I can't give you enough love.. and that's a lot.
It's like a torture here without you.
Are you still interesed in me ? Give a clue.
These rhymes can make you cry, but also make you mad.
It's like my kid, i didn't hear his first word : dad.

Chorus

Girl,
I love you, that's the only thing I can give you.
Write me back, love me back, you and me, us two.
Always be togheter, no one will destroy-that.
Girl, I wait for you, wait for me, ejoy-prison-rat.


Verse 02

I wanna end my life in here, So that i can be in heaven.
But than i'm just weak, Than i can't see our little kid, Evan.
That's my big boy, just like his daddy. promise me that u come search-me.
Be loyal, wait for me, time is tough. But I will go to the church-eyo.
The only thing i can proove to you is my love-to-you.
That's much, no doubt, I love u a lot, It's-true.
.Giorgo.
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Postby C-Game » Oct 31st, '06, 17:42

all the best bro
waitin for it
anyway the meanin is there
cool drop
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