Structure Practice

by **Kez** » Nov 5th, '06, 19:46

You're hooked on my music like a crack addict
You cannot relax until you have had it
I'll blast your success open with a gun an'
Distinguish any and all hope you had spun!
My rap's like a needle, it gets stuck in mind
But instead of high, you trip on fuckin' ryhmes!
You gotta get back in your damn mother's womb
Cause you can't accept, bitch that i'm comin soon!
My tracks in UWC will show these
Gits, for us this is effortless, it's so easy
Unlike you, it's because you take forever
And you still have the nerve to say you're better
I'm the missing piece of the fuckin puzzle
I'm the one who does better than you, does all
That you wanted and more, i ask are you mad?
You should be pissed whenever i start to rap!

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Practising with structure this time, kept the same amount of syllables for each line.

GIVE FEED.

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Nov 5th, '06, 21:48

well its kool but i dunno man whats this rythm about

Gits, for us this is effortless, it's so eas-
-y, unlike you, because you take forever

start the word on one line end it on another :confusion:

thats fucked

but yeh structure is getting better

by **2 DeeP** » Nov 5th, '06, 23:32

yae man its getin betta :smoking:

it dusnt all rhyme but its all good :smoking:

hope the feed helps yoo

by **C-Game** » Nov 6th, '06, 16:54

struct is gettin better

by **Jay-19** » Nov 7th, '06, 22:50

Ey Kez.. it looks good now

by **Big-T** » Nov 8th, '06, 19:34

Good rhyme structure there ye

But surely...

"You gotta get back in your damn mother's womb
Cause you can't accept, bitch that i'm comin soon!"

Iz from the Royce 5' 9" verse in Scary Movies if u no it..?

"Bad And Evil is coming soon
Emcees get stuck head first back in they mother's womb"

Or iz that just a coincedence :sweating:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Nov 8th, '06, 19:49

Big-T wrote:Good rhyme structure there ye

But surely...

"You gotta get back in your damn mother's womb
Cause you can't accept, bitch that i'm comin soon!"

Iz from the Royce 5' 9" verse in Scary Movies if u no it..?

"Bad And Evil is coming soon
Emcees get stuck head first back in they mother's womb"

Or iz that just a coincedence

they onyl have same rythming the rest is different :unsure:

by **Big-T** » Nov 8th, '06, 19:50

Bar wrote:
Big-T wrote:Good rhyme structure there ye

But surely...

"You gotta get back in your damn mother's womb
Cause you can't accept, bitch that i'm comin soon!"

Iz from the Royce 5' 9" verse in Scary Movies if u no it..?

"Bad And Evil is coming soon
Emcees get stuck head first back in they mother's womb"

Or iz that just a coincedence

they onyl have same rythming the rest is different

Oh yeah i supose so sorry just noticed it....

by **Kez** » Nov 8th, '06, 19:51

Big-T wrote:Good rhyme structure there ye

But surely...

"You gotta get back in your damn mother's womb
Cause you can't accept, bitch that i'm comin soon!"

Iz from the Royce 5' 9" verse in Scary Movies if u no it..?

"Bad And Evil is coming soon
Emcees get stuck head first back in they mother's womb"

Or iz that just a coincedence

Must be

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