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Postby Jay-19 » Nov 7th, '06, 23:01

I can battle anyone while I'm sippin' Juice & Jin
To say you are the best is like scream truce to win
I spit shit thru my mouth coz my bunghole won't act
And my rhymes stings harder than a lungful of crack
Cassidy says he's the biggest now since Biggie's gone
He's wrong, he's not even bigger than Biggies guns
I'm nuts and insane I need a chain around my wrist
If you think I'm just shit, I will spray a round of piss
I live in Sweden, the best country in this shitty world
With nice and normal weight people and pretty girls
You need to get big if you wanna be recognized
But not "big" as you think, c'mon check your thighs
I'm not really a real rapper I'm just a prototype
So kiss my ass bitch! Coz you're a homo, right?

Yeah.. nuff said! :smoking:
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Re: Just some shit...

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 7th, '06, 23:05

KillahGoat wrote:I can battle anyone while I'm sippin' Juice & Jin
To say you are the best is like scream truce to win
I spit shit thru my mouth coz my bunghole won't act
And my rhymes stings harder than a lungful of crack
Cassidy says he's the biggest now since Biggie's gone
He's wrong, he's not even bigger than Biggies guns

I'm nuts and insane I need a chain around my wrist
If you think I'm just shit, I will spray a round of piss

I live in Sweden, the best country in this shitty world
With nice and normal weight people and pretty girls

You need to get big if you wanna be recognized
But not "big" as you think, c'mon check your thighs
I'm not really a real rapper I'm just a prototype
So kiss my ass bitch! Coz you're a homo, right?

Yeah.. nuff said! :smoking:


some lines dont rythm..... :unsure: bolded them

unless you prounounce with a twang or somehting they dont rythm...rest is kool
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Postby Jay-19 » Nov 7th, '06, 23:09

Yeah Bar, I twist the pronounce a lil bit..

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 7th, '06, 23:37

KillahGoat wrote:Yeah Bar, I twist the pronounce a lil bit..

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kool then it all rythmes :sweating:
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Postby Kez » Nov 7th, '06, 23:38

I understand where he's coming from on them Bar, i do that too often.

Nice shit Killahgoat, liked the multis :worship:
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Postby Jay-19 » Nov 7th, '06, 23:38

Yeah :8)

Thank u Kez :smoking:
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Postby Big-T » Nov 8th, '06, 19:31

Sick rhymez man i like em all last line made me laugh
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Postby Jay-19 » Nov 8th, '06, 21:58

Feels good to hear I did something good then :8)
Thank you Big-T!
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