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by **stevethetruth** » Nov 5th, '06, 05:14

a little verse i'm working on for a collab
some feedback would be cool

You haters just love to hate you can

by **C-Game** » Nov 5th, '06, 07:39

collab with who?

by **stevethetruth** » Nov 5th, '06, 15:06

cgame wrote:collab with who?

with this dude named phantom

by **Marth** » Nov 5th, '06, 15:18

rhymes 're good, dunno actually what kind of feed i got to give

by **stevethetruth** » Nov 5th, '06, 15:32

Marth wrote:rhymes 're good, dunno actually what kind of feed i got to give

lol any feed is cool bro thanks for checking it out

by **stevethetruth** » Nov 5th, '06, 23:43

no feed??

by **Marth** » Nov 6th, '06, 16:23

well when you ask for it

I think you better can just put the rhymes a bit better, so it sounds more averaged got it?
and I think you need to make audio
and put good the subject you want to tell

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Nov 6th, '06, 16:25

Marth wrote:well when you ask for it

I think you better can just put the rhymes a bit better, so it sounds more averaged got it?
and I think you need to make audio
and put good the subject you want to tell

you canni talk about daein audio we all heard your voice :laughing:

by **shady-fan** » Nov 6th, '06, 23:04

i think its pretty good :happy:

better then anything i can right, thats fo sho

by **Rae** » Nov 7th, '06, 13:14

it sounds good babe!

good job

by **stevethetruth** » Nov 7th, '06, 16:18

wow thanks for the feedback people lol

and clarky it means alot to hear that from you lol

by **stevethetruth** » Nov 7th, '06, 16:24

Clarky wrote:Keep practuising tho man this one flowed good.

thanks man i will and yeah the audio should be out in a couple days

by **stevethetruth** » Nov 8th, '06, 19:57

ehh i feel like bumping this the audio is in the audio section called haters can hate

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