I personaly think this is the best song I've ever written

[Inzanity]

Please leave feed on this and let me know wat u think I worked hard on this one and I really wanna know wat everone think's about it. It's supposed to go to the "No Apologie's" beat

(Verse 1)
Feel this pain of mine
From a soul that's been
stained with time
I'm at the point where
I ain't afriad to die
so I look to God for answers
but apparently He ain't got no answers
and goddam it hurts
I'm mad at God and
I'm mad at Heaven
cause' just like my uncle
I'm headed for a tragic ending
and just like my aunt
I'll meet him when I get there
even though I want him here with me
cause' I need him to wipe these wet tears
I know this is gettin deep but u gotta bare with me
my soul is scared with sorrow
I'm cold, with a heart of charcole

(Chorus)
all I could picture is their ashes
and my emotion's are mixed up from past shit
there's too much dirt on my shoulder's
there's too much hurt that I hold in
(repeat)

(verse 2)
It takes me five minutes
to write my feeling's on paper
but it'll take a lifetime
to get rid of this hatred
cause' my soul's wounded
the pain's been screwed in
and there's no way to unscrew it
the only thing that help's is this music
so I take it, write it, then use it
just to undo shit, from a past that was abusive
and Eric I let u live in my house for free
I never asked u to do shit
and yet u stole from me
after I helped u I didn't have to but I did
u bastard u ain't shit
y would u steal from family
watever dawg u still my family
we're blood which means I have to love u
no matter what, even if u did turn ur back on me
I still got ur back homie

(Chorus)

(Verse 3)
this life can sometime's have u contemplating suicide
especialy if the situation is do or die
so when brightness fade's to dark
and u find urself fighting a shaded heart
just remember it dosen't matter wat way it starts
it's where u end that matters
so even when ur shaddered
don't give up u gotta win the battle
cuz' life's a war, so be a soldier
fight the war, until it's over
so when a storm come's in
and everywhere u look u see a storm coming
don't panic, march forth,
life ain't suppoused to go the way u planed it
u gotta learn to take watever ur handed
even when death is the only way out
and every step u take only brings doubt
u just gotta pray the lonelyness out
even though ur feeling cold and lost
just remember ur soul's at cost

(Chorus)

[sneekykiddo]

Hey its not that bad really.

[D@vid]

i may not know how to write music, but that is a good ass song, especially cuz i can kinda relate

[Rae]

damn ... i like it

keep it up!

i wanna read more from u ...

(are u gonna do an audio?)

[Inzanity]

damn ... i like it

keep it up!

i wanna read more from u ...

(are u gonna do an audio?)

I'm too shy to do an audio

[C-Game]

damn ... i like it

keep it up!

i wanna read more from u ...

(are u gonna do an audio?)

I'm too shy to do an audio

damn man


really liked the depth and meanin and multies
wow simply wow
and do an audio

[Kez]

Yeah man you should do audio, i mean one of the most respected people on here thinks i suck, but i still do it!
Hoping to hear audio from you

Yeah i liked the song, structure was good.

[MoBrat]

that would be a good song i'd love 2 hear the audio

[Inzanity]

good news I'll do the audio it'll be on the album that I post up. I'll have a tracklist for the album soon.

[Inzanity]

hells yeah

yea thanks to my home boy Kyle who hooked me up with some beats and is letting me use his place for recording he's going to produce the album for me.

[Restlesswon]

damn lota nice lines in there,lookin forward to this audio

[Hypno]

This shit is pretty tight man.
I would like to hear more of you.
And yea do a audio