Love vs. Friendship [Incomplete]

[Ethos]

I'm all hyped up about getting my mic and stuff that i've been writing so much. This is some thing I started earlier today. I'm thinking about a chorus and 2 more versus. I'll post them when i'm done. but in the mean time.... what do you all think?


Love Vs. Friendship
Feelings change you, like some type of soul food,
They dictate to you what could be bad and good//
No matter what, these feelings seem to confuse me,
They made me a lover boy, desperate for this girl I need//
Well

[Ethos]

just added 2nd verse. that's the end of it any feed?