Verse from upcoming song

[Coccoa]

Is the anything else to say, about death
Life, after awhile, to comes to end
Cuz without the misery, there be no happyness
Without being crowded there be no loneliness
See i dont got nothing, i'd get anything
I think 50 explain this, no Many Men
Cuz they wish death to me, i wish em as well
I kept away from that, i got a story to tell
About that place on earth, when none grows
Yeah, i ve been away, so my emotions froze
Dunn, im about to get schitzo, and kill over jokes
Its the city who's crazy, i aint that loc
I never did more than i ever should have done
When you born round here, bound to die with a gun
Huh, this is sin city, and we dont even start
Around here you get popped over musical art

Come on, use ur hate kid.

[Restlesswon]

nice shit

[Rae]

damn! i love it!

good job! def. cant wait to hear a audio (if u do 1)

[Coccoa]

I will....in two three weeks.

[Ethos]

nice stuff you got going on there. i hope that the other verses will be just as good

[Coccoa]

I almost finishing the second one now.

[C-Game]

nice stuff man

hey bro is this our collab one...

[Coccoa]

I dunno. If the lyrics match, they are.

[ripbigproof]

I like it :d

[Infliction]

Yeh I agree wit maybe on the longer thing.

Imma be 100% honest here aiight? No hate whatsoever b. I dint really understand what you were tryna say, like ya spellin' and grammar was off or somethin'. I've seen a lot better from you, but thats just my opinion, you don gotta like it, but thats just how it seems to me.

[Coccoa]

Ummm...why? Wuts wrong with my spelling?

[Infliction]

Is ther anything else to say, about death
Life, after awhile, to comes to end (Dont understand that sentence at all)
Cuz without the misery, there be no happyness
Without being crowded there be no loneliness
See i dont got nothing, i'd get anything
I think 50 explain this, no Many Men (Donno what you're trying to say)
Cuz they wish death to me, i wish em as well
I kept away from that, i got a story to tell
About that place on earth, when none grows
Yeah, i ve been away, so my emotions froze
Dunn, im about to get schitzo, and kill over jokes
Its the city who's crazy, i aint that loc
I never did more than i ever should have done
When you born round here, bound to die with a gun
Huh, this is sin city, and we dont even start
Around here you get popped over musical art

Come on, use ur hate kid.

Bolded the parts that didnt make sense to me, but reading it again it was better than i had initially thought, and makes more sense htan i had initally thought.

[Coccoa]

Is ther anything else to say, about death
Life, after awhile, IT comes to AN end (Dont understand that sentence at all)
Cuz without the misery, there be no happyness
Without being crowded there be no loneliness
See i dont got nothing, i'd get anything
I think 50 explain this, ON Many Men (Donno what you're trying to say)
Cuz they wish death to me, i wish em as well
I kept away from that, i got a story to tell
About that place on earth, when none grows
Yeah, i ve been away, so my emotions froze
Dunn, im about to get schitzo, and kill over jokes
Its the city who's crazy, i aint that loc
I never did more than i ever should have done
When you born round here, bound to die with a gun
Huh, this is sin city, and we dont even start
Around here you get popped over musical art

Come on, use ur hate kid.

Is it working now?

[Infliction]

Yea man its a lot better that way.

[Coccoa]

Still is gangsta shit. Anyone got an idea on which beat i should rap this?