The Way You All Hit (COMPLETE, FEED!)

by **Kez** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:10

I don't make rap, i just make great music
Where i make you look a tit when you say you got eight uzis
I murder literature when i create this rhyme
Shit, ask my friends, it's shit we hate, it's fine!
People forever quoting Two Flows at me, and Fuckin Girl
A hybrid of friend and enemy, like a cluckin squirrel!
Ever since i first started rhymes with no set events
I've done nothing else and it's quite obvious, the evidence
Is right in front of you, it's thumping you
Then choking you to death, giving you CPR and crushin you with my foot and shoe!
I share these CDs around the callous way
And you throw it in my face, man, your pal is gay
The only risk of revealing rap is these anal gits
Who need to have a medical school student perform a facial lift
Where they stitch the mouth shut till his face is slit
Don't tell me to shut up, this is just the way this is!

[Chorus]
I won't apologise cause you think i suck are you mad?
I'm too much of a chav to accept it so just fuck off you bastard
Won't apologise even if it means everyone on TR Shady
Become retard babies and say they all hate me!
Cause no matter what i'm doomed to always get my threads flamed
Cause it allows me to see my options, and sets me less stakes
To aspire to, and it lets me be able to take your jips
Cause i'm used to you critics and the way you all hit!

Start playing this record and you can't say it's defective
But they try to find problems, like they the gayest detective
This is not bullshit, your jokes are something that i got full with
I aint got no more room, find another hotel cause i'm locked bolted!
I predict how you act cause i've got this sound intact
I'm not confused, i've got it all figured out in fact!
Scream to the sky with lyrics with demons inside
Attacks you till your feelings'll die, and you keel and just cry
Or vice versa, get Karma and fight worse an'
Piss people like us off till we dream about tryin' murder
Motherfuckers i know talk about me, i've heard 'em
I'm the centre of conversation, it's like they're like perverts!
This rap is a forcefield, that rappers scratch or peel
But don't make a dent, the bastards have fought, we'll
See if they can get past my words that're wrong, does it work if i'm on
To the jokes? No, exactly, cause now i'm used to how you work, friggin mong!

[Chorus]
I won't apologise cause you think i suck are you mad?
I'm too much of a chav to accept it so just fuck off you bastard
Won't apologise even if it means everyone on TR Shady
Become retard babies and say they all hate me!
Cause no matter what i'm doomed to always get my threads flamed
Cause it allows me to see my options, and sets me less stakes
To aspire to, and it lets me be able to take your jips
Cause i'm used to you critics and the way you all hit!

You exaggerate shit till it gets hacked and taken
Apart and then you decide: let's amputate it
You say you'll play my CD in nightclubs, a place full of VD and right fucks
Where when you know there's a crowd, that we'll see some right hooks!
This rap is higher than if i scream it at the sky an
Get a mic and plug it into a motherfuckin amplifier!
JDogg's a prime example, gay dog's got rhymed and trampled
Spine got shangled, till the line's on an angle!
Critics criticise cause it's fitting in their eyes
Bitches little dykes, friggin tits and i've
Spent too much time writin about you, why i should shout to
A microphone i don't know, it's not worth the time, it's about you!
I'm just a talented MC, but you hate me for it
They play games insult it, then just feign igorance!
So you can hate me, sure, but my rap's superior
You're just jealous of that to hear the uh content that you fearin' it!

[Chorus]
I won't apologise cause you think i suck are you mad?
I'm too much of a chav to accept it so just fuck off you bastard
Won't apologise even if it means everyone on TR Shady
Become retard babies and say they all hate me!
Cause no matter what i'm doomed to always get my threads flamed
Cause it allows me to see my options, and sets me less stakes
To aspire to, and it lets me be able to take your jips
Cause i'm used to you critics and the way you all hit!

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Finished.
Feed.

by **Jdogg06** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:19

lmao u fuckin suck how u gonna critasize me like i said go drink ur tea and dont try to rap that shit was weak as hell and it was written u suck dude

by **Kez** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:21

Jdogg06 wrote:lmao u fuckin suck how u gonna critasize me like i said go drink ur tea and dont try to rap that shit was weak as hell and it was written u suck dude

First of all, you spelt criticise wrong.
Second, i hate tea.
And all you said was "i fuckin suck" and "that shit was weak as hell", now that's the shittiest "feedback" i've ever heard.
And yeah it was written, that's kinda the idea of the Creative WRITING area.

And i'm sure the fact that i pissed you off by voting against you in Bar's battle has nothing to do with your sudden dislike of me. :whistle:

by **Jdogg06** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:25

i dont give a fuck what i spelt wrong bitch this aint school and yeah so whats thats all i said its the truth ur shit sucked

by **Kez** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:26

^ Says the guy who is getting pummelled by Bar right at this moment

by **Jdogg06** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:28

just take that rap off its horrible

by **Kez** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:29

I notice how you can't come up with any good comebacks, except to just say "it's horrible".

Whoa, can't argue with that. :whistle:

by **Jdogg06** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:30

cuz thats what this is all about right now so fuck u

by **Kez** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:33

Grow up.

Anybody can call somebody shit and say "fuck you" to them, you know who does that?

An idiot.

You've just got a grudge cause i voted against you in a battle (which Bar DID beat you on, did i actually insult you? Let me tell you, i was insulted on my first battle when i sucked, all i said was about Barbeing better), which is really pretty pathetic.

by **Jdogg06** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:35

i won that battle u saw i only had 90 some post and voted for bar

by **Kez** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:39

Why do i care?

All i did was vote because i preferred Bar's verse to yours.
All this complaining about it aint gonna change that.

by **Jdogg06** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:41

well i dont care about n e one that votes against me i no i won every battle im in

by **Kez** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:46

So if you don't care, why have you spent about half an hour posting moaning at me because of it?

by **Jdogg06** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:49

cuz england fucks dont have a right to vote against americans

by **Kez** » Dec 1st, '06, 20:51

Nice attitude.

The Way You All Hit (COMPLETE, FEED!)

The Way You All Hit (COMPLETE, FEED!)

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