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my own little hip hop is dead verse

Postby Crossova16 » Dec 3rd, '06, 16:34

yo yo

this rap game aint the same,homy, we need to stop it
before hip hop dies, all dese murder albums, we gotta top it
dont let these "killing niggaz type of songs" sell
kuz den deyll keep makin them and cds be off the shelves
wats rong wid dere brains or is it sumthing in the booth
that makes them make fucked up songs and keep corruptin up the youth
its stupid homy dis gang violence isnt worth it
why are walking away from an enviroment dats so perfect
whats so cool about taking some niggaz life
whats so cool bout rapin some niggaz wife
is that what you want to see through the years
that aint what i want for my lil kids to hear
it brings fear,
and it brings me to the tought that the DEATH OF HIP HOP IS NEAR
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Postby Crossova16 » Dec 3rd, '06, 16:40

give me some thoughs please
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Re: my own little hip hop is dead verse

Postby Inzanity » Dec 3rd, '06, 16:58

nice shit man :smoking:
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Re: my own little hip hop is dead verse

Postby Coccoa » Dec 3rd, '06, 17:02

Crossova16 wrote:yo yo

this rap game aint the same,homy, we need to stop it
before hip hop dies, all dese murder albums, we gotta top it
dont let these "killing ***** type of songs" sell
kuz den deyll keep makin them and cds be off the shelves
wats rong wid dere brains or is it sumthing in the booth
that makes them make fucked up songs and keep corruptin up the youth
its stupid homy dis gang violence isnt worth it
why are walking away from an enviroment dats so perfect
whats so cool about taking some ***** life
whats so cool bout rapin some ***** wife
is that what you want to see through the years
that aint what i want for my lil kids to hear
it brings fear,
and it brings me to the tought that the DEATH OF HIP HOP IS NEAR


Make sure u black or at least latino before u say that.
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