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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 11th, '06, 04:37

That look of jealously
It truly changes a man
I
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Postby Inches » Dec 11th, '06, 05:06

gay.
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 11th, '06, 05:10

lmao it's not really a sex song you'll once i finish the second verse
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Postby D@vid » Dec 11th, '06, 06:09

Sarah wrote:Awesome :D a sex song, nice ;) . You should of seen the one I wrote :laughing: oh god



the beginning was good, didn't see the rest of it, maybe u didn't even finish it, but neways good job steve.nice little flow
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 11th, '06, 17:20

thanks and yeah it should be finished tonight no doubt
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Postby C-Game » Dec 11th, '06, 17:30

inches2010 wrote:gay.
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lol

hey steve i guess u had a girl in ur mind who is she>>

any way song wise it was nice and simple
cant expect any mulites in this
coz its jealousy ryt
i can see ur singin this in a unhappy mood
but lyrically wise its kool
not one of ur best
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 11th, '06, 17:36

lmao yeah it's hard to be consistent

and maybe lmao i think i would've wrote something else if i had it on my mind but once i heard the beat it just clicked lol

i would've wrote about something different but i ain' as creative as you lol
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Postby herecomesme1990 » Dec 12th, '06, 07:03

it was good... :) nice work m8
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 12th, '06, 16:40

herecomesme1990 wrote:it was good... :) nice work m8


thanks for checking it out


@maybe damn you got like a lesson and tip for everything is this something you picked up or you taught yourself j/c?
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