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[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

this is typical im back on this satirical lyrical,
and its a miracle i pull it off , a dont pull no wool or cloth,
your eyes are clear a know you despise and fear,
that a perservere with this geer and look at a career,
am trying hard dont start crying hard a feel like a shard,
ma income gone well some about to become none,
so a dont know what to do no longer pull through,
feel like my dreams shattered and the teams tattered,
im starting not to care but parting do i dare,
you wont understand what im saying, cant stand what im laying,
but this is just a verse and as the curse got worse,
a need a nurse to help me disperse or reimberse,

just a short verse

feed please

[Rae]

damn Bar that was good!

u've been gettin soooo much betta!

i wish i could write stuff like that ... urs had way more than just rhymes @ tha end ... cant really explain it ... but u know what i mean lol

good job!

[PmT-Faith]

Its good, but 1 question how come you put "a" instead of "i" example

"that a perservere with this geer and look at a career"
^
shouldnt that say i ? lol i unno if its the way you type cause of the country your in and the possible language you speak lol just curious

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Its good, but 1 question how come you put "a" instead of "i" example

"that a perservere with this geer and look at a career"
^
shouldnt that say i ? lol i unno if its the way you type cause of the country your in and the possible language you speak lol just curious

its just the way i talk lol

i is english
a is scottish

lol i never noticed it before


@ rae...thank you and i think i get what you mean lol thx again

[Inzanity]

Its good, but 1 question how come you put "a" instead of "i" example

"that a perservere with this geer and look at a career"
^
shouldnt that say i ? lol i unno if its the way you type cause of the country your in and the possible language you speak lol just curious

its just the way i talk lol

i is english
a is scottish

lol i never noticed it before


@ rae...thank you and i think i get what you mean lol thx again

ha ha I thought it was just a spelling mistake u made LMAO anyway nice shit

[stevethetruth]

damn dude your way better than me lol i can't imagine how good you'll be when your my age

big ups bro

keep em coming

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

damn dude your way better than me lol i can't imagine how good you'll be when your my age

big ups bro

keep em coming

thx man means alot i still aint near were i wanne be though

[4D]

^^What a loada of shite!


Lmao, only messin' dude!


Good rhyme man, you've got the right idea. I hate to see people try the simple rhymes, that's the easy way out, you're rising to the challenge, and doing a very good job. Keep it up man, got potential!


P.s I knew it was your accent you were tryin to capture, props for that too. I sometimes write things how I pronounce them too.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

^^What a loada of shite!


Lmao, only messin' dude!


Good rhyme man, you've got the right idea. I hate to see people try the simple rhymes, that's the easy way out, you're rising to the challenge, and doing a very good job. Keep it up man, got potential!


P.s I knew it was your accent you were tryin to capture, props for that too. I sometimes write things how I pronounce them too.

lol thanks man

[C-Game]

i agree with steve
wen u hit ma age ull be way better
way to go man

nice stuff
the rhymes are complex and stuff
i like it alot

way to go uwc souiljah

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

i agree with steve
wen u hit ma age ull be way better
way to go man

nice stuff
the rhymes are complex and stuff
i like it alot

way to go uwc souiljah

lol thx man

[yoshi]

ahhh, that's the verse you wanted me to give groupie feed on!! lmao i liked it [what a surprise.. >_>] anyway, you're getting better i guess audio it

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

ahhh, that's the verse you wanted me to give groupie feed on!! lmao i liked it [what a surprise.. >_>] anyway, you're getting better i guess audio it

lol

you just wanne hear my voice

dont worry loads more audio coming as of nwo since ig ot sacked i got more free time to record

[yoshi]

sure i want..