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Postby Enimee » Dec 11th, '06, 23:59

jus real quick summin up my emotions and thoughts


we can be together forever and never dismember
but your colder then chris cringle in late december
so im sorta havin a fender bender my brains in a blender
im stuck in this battlin mode and its insane what i render

so let me paint this picture for you show you what im itchin ta do
my emotions are off the ricter its true im bout to blow and im stickin ta you
fuck the poorer we're in it for the richer im blue and im stricken by the flu
cause im love you but yet im sickend by what you do every day im kickin in to

this brick that has me love sick for this chick im above this but shit
i dont know if its love or lust which has me ready ta be bustin
and burstin explodin with erosion time has me corrodin the love boat is floatin
but i gotta be dope-man cant be the dopeman even though she has me chokin



might add more...but just quick idea jottin
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 12th, '06, 00:02

and as jesus walked through the red sea eminee found flow *big rond of applaues*

nice, deep, good lyrics, nice stuff :D
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Postby Enimee » Dec 12th, '06, 00:04

thanks ....................... i think lol :unsure: :happy: :8) :flower: :) :p :D :tounge2: :wave: :whistle: :sweating: :smoking: :zipped: :worship: ;) :confusion: :'( :angry: :( :shifty: ...im bored
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Postby Inzanity » Dec 12th, '06, 00:05

great lyrics in this man this shit mad dope :smoking:
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Postby Rae » Dec 12th, '06, 00:06

wow that was nice! :)

deep and nice ... had good flow and rhymes ... and nice metaphors etc ...

keep it up :D
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Postby Enimee » Dec 12th, '06, 00:18

double thanks...more bumpfeedwheteveryouwnnacallit
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