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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 16th, '06, 06:19

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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 16th, '06, 06:33

:D thanks a lot sarah :D:D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 16th, '06, 12:59

stop using eminem beats :tounge2: :p

aint got time to read it now ill check ti when i come back from braeheed.....but if it gonni be on your next tape try not to use eminem beats....really lol
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Postby C-Game » Dec 16th, '06, 18:17

hey steve some kool stuff
yea i agree with bar
but u can improve ur writin prowess
but if ur doin an audio my advice is to do it for an authentic beat
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 16th, '06, 18:18

Bar wrote:stop using eminem beats :tounge2: :p

aint got time to read it now ill check ti when i come back from braeheed.....but if it gonni be on your next tape try not to use eminem beats....really lol


well the thing was i was lisening to an eminem acapella lol and felt like writeing to it

oh and if this is even on the tape which i highy doubt

it's gonna be the only eminem beat on there lol so don't worry
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 16th, '06, 18:24

cgame wrote:hey steve some kool stuff
yea i agree with bar
but u can improve ur writin prowess
but if ur doin an audio my advice is to do it for an authentic beat


well the funny thing is i'm trying to improve but i don't idk w/e lol
oh and thanks for checking it out
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 16th, '06, 19:36

ok nwo for real feed :D


good shit your getting better and better with your tyhming and your trying hard so keep it up man :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 16th, '06, 20:23

Bar wrote:ok nwo for real feed :D


good shit your getting better and better with your tyhming and your trying hard so keep it up man :D


lmao yeah i can write better lyrically but this is a deep song in my opinon lol

oh and people 2nd verse will be 28 lines so 12 more coming lol
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Postby Rae » Dec 16th, '06, 20:39

heyy i like it! def. 1 of ur best ina while ;)

and like tha beat u did it 2 ... :D

keep it up hunn :p
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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 16th, '06, 20:54

thanks for checking it out lol
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Postby Rae » Dec 16th, '06, 20:57

steverocks88 wrote:thanks for checking it out lol



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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 17th, '06, 16:53

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Postby stevethetruth » Dec 18th, '06, 05:32

over 100 views and only 4 feeds :(
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Postby Rae » Dec 20th, '06, 21:06

steverocks88 wrote:over 100 views and only 4 feeds :(



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