Another...need feed too

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i clicked on who it is

mr nation

lol it think


structure is......bad that needs work

rythm are better still not complex

flow is ok when you look at the structure

[Mr. Cookie]

i clicked on who it is

mr nation

lol it think


structure is......bad that needs work

rythm are better still not complex

flow is ok when you look at the structure

Wrong...that ain't me...

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i clicked on who it is

mr nation

lol it think


structure is......bad that needs work

rythm are better still not complex

flow is ok when you look at the structure

Wrong...that ain't me...

i guessed coz you talking bout getting a mic

[Mr. Cookie]

naw man...I got other shit...

[ThomasAguanis]

nicely done. I recognize the style in a way so I'm pretty sure I know who it is. They did good and I still see improvements they made. Glad to see they're still writing

and it cant be a guy...unless a guy would say:

place'n me at the top of the list/
for best chick who can throw a fist /

[Enimee]

wasnt great....why you postin fer other people?

[$0 R3@L]

its angie i think,shes a gurl and she cant post nuttin....she even tried hiding the scent wit a random post lmao

ayway its good and fairly complex in ways....not bad use of words ive seen much worse in that tr tournament lmao

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its angie i think,shes a gurl and she cant post nuttin....she even tried hiding the scent wit a random post lmao

ayway its good and fairly complex in ways....not bad use of words ive seen much worse in that tr tournament lmao

agree with real

plus it IS angie sarah only ever posts these around the same time angie is online lol

this was posted ages ago