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ridin dirty by chammilionaire...broke down

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ridin dirty by chammilionaire...broke down

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 19th, '06, 02:11

Police think they can see me lean
I'm tint so it ain't easy to be seen
When you see me ride by they can see the glean
And my shine on the deck and the TV screen
Ride with a new chick, she like hold up
Next to the playstation controller is a full clip and my pistola
Turn a jacker into a coma
Girl you ain't know, I'm crazy like Krayzie Bone
Just tryin to bone ain't tryin to have no babies
Rock clean itself so I pull in ladies
Laws of patrolling you know they hate me
Music turned all the way up until the maximum
I can speak for some niggas tryin to jack for some
But we packin somethin that we have and um will have a nigga locked up in the maximum
Security cell, I'm grippin oak
Music loud and tippin slow
Twist and twistin like hit this dough
Pull up from behind and is in his throat
Windows down gotta stop pollution
CDs change niggas like who is that producing?
This the Play-N-Skillz when we out and cruisin
Got warrants in every city except Houston but I'm still ain't losin


this is something i find funny to read


really check the lyrics , most rythming is with really simple words

slow
dough


anythign on way of a multi is simple as hell aswell

me lean
be seen


see the glean
the TV screen


then you get lines with strange structure ( rythm wise )

Security cell, I'm grippin oak
Music loud and tippin slow
Twist and twistin like hit this dough
Pull up from behind and is in his throat



sure the 2 middle lines tyhm BUT the other 2 are just there and check back the dont rythm with the lines above or below them



and some people wonder why nas is saying hip hop is dead....how a guy that must put little work as this into his rythms has a number 1 smash hit baffles me....but thats life eh lol

also i dont want anyoen to be annoyed by this im bored and was looking for game lyrics and found this read it and decided to do it lol

i probly also missed out some mad ass line multi that makes him god...probly not though :whistle:


lol :D
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 19th, '06, 14:35

So what?
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 19th, '06, 14:41

Coccoa wrote:So what?



:unsure: i was bored :flower:
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 19th, '06, 15:56

Obviously.
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 19th, '06, 16:09

bar its rhymes not bloody "rythms" lol soz it was just annoyin me :p
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 19th, '06, 16:14

HAYZI wrote:bar its rhymes not bloody "rythms" lol soz it was just annoyin me :p


imma a shit speeller and typer lol
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 19th, '06, 16:28

Bar wrote:
HAYZI wrote:bar its rhymes not bloody "rythms" lol soz it was just annoyin me :p


imma a shit speeller and typer lol



no shit :p :D
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Postby 4D » Dec 20th, '06, 00:21

HAYZI wrote:bar its rhymes not bloody "rythms" lol soz it was just annoyin me :p


Been thinkin the same thing for ages now, was too lazy to say! :D

Besides, Bar's a sound fella, didn`t wanna insult him. :whistle:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 20th, '06, 00:37

FORDIE wrote:
HAYZI wrote:bar its rhymes not bloody "rythms" lol soz it was just annoyin me :p


Been thinkin the same thing for ages now, was too lazy to say! :D

Besides, Bar's a sound fella, didn`t wanna insult him. :whistle:


lol it aint a insult , i know im shit at spelling , then add bad spellign a shit typer it doesnt work otu to good.....weirdest thing is i passed my english exams with high marks :laughing:
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Postby JMG » Dec 20th, '06, 20:17

yeah u have no life
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Postby Aft3rmath » Dec 20th, '06, 20:25

No life exactly lol, good luck breakn down you shit, must be fun wasting your time. :shifty:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Dec 20th, '06, 21:17

Aft3rmath wrote:No life exactly lol, good luck breakn down you shit, must be fun wasting your time. :shifty:


was bored beyong beileif.....porn wasnt working need i say more :zipped:


a jdogg imma ignore you you just gonni get banned again
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Postby Browngangsta210 » Dec 27th, '06, 08:05

Bar wrote:
Aft3rmath wrote:No life exactly lol, good luck breakn down you shit, must be fun wasting your time. :shifty:


was bored beyong beileif.....porn wasnt working need i say more :zipped:


a jdogg imma ignore you you just gonni get banned again
SHIT PORN ALWAYS WORKS FOR ME, AND IF U GET BORED WITH JUST REGULAR SEX DATS WHY THEY MADE ...FOOT JOB, ANAL, LESBIEN(HELL YEAH! :shifty: ), HARDCORE, etc. HOW CAN SUMONE GET BORED IF THERES LIKE 167 CATEGORIES IN PORN?
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 12th, '07, 14:28

wasabi wrote:that my favorite part of chamillionaires ridin dirty


stop fucking bumping every topic in here your puting all the new ones away down bottom :angry:
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