Think I'm In Love?

[TheWeirdoIsBack]

[Verse 1]
Looking at you from across the room
Your like a flower thats just starting to bloom
I've known you for only a few years
But whenever you leave it brings me to tears
I don't know if you feel what I do
All I know is I want you to be my boo*
You sometimes act like you'd like to go out
But sometimes you just sit there and pout
Cause nothings your way, you claimed he's gay, down at the bay, just keep it quiet and come out to play

[Chorus 1]
Should I ask or just not bother?
I don't even know your father
Would you care what people think?
When they find out that we's on a link
Never travel alone, we never talk on the phone, I guess I should just be gon'

[Verse 2]
You know now that I think about it, I wrote the chorus
Is it even worth it?
To try and get together, pretend we're happy and have a daughter named Doris
Ten years later we get into a fight, late at night, you fuckin' dike
Never mind I changed my mind just forget me and don't talk
I thought it would work but we ain't even go out and it ain't gunna walk
I figured it all out, we'd go out we'd be happy
Only until you dump me for some fag with a dog named Yappy
Thought this song was actually somethin' different?
Think again fuckers I'm still blasting your face

[Chorus 2]
You thought I changed?
You thought it was another love song
I've already had three hanged
Two were on the bong
And did it themselves, after I convinced 'em
Everyone that saw me now walks with a limb

*I really really REALLY didn't wanna use this word but it rhymed and fits so it works.

You probably thought it was a real love song huh? Nope.

REAL NAME OF THE SONG: Love/Hate: Pick A Verse

Looking for some reviews, leave 'em.

[Enimee]

no offense but it was toooooo eminemish...not a bad thing but if you plan on goin professional id get your own stile

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

no offense but it was toooooo eminemish...not a bad thing but if you plan on goin professional id get your own stile

its nothing like eminem........its a love song for fucksake

[Enimee]

no im sayin jus the general IDEA of the song was a bit eminemish.....in love then at the end goes ta kill the trick

stop disagreein wit me just to be difficult...i like it to...sorta

[Kez]

^ Just cause Eminem's done it don't mean that nobody else can.
I liked it, could of been more complex but i liked it.

[TheWeirdoIsBack]

no offense but it was toooooo eminemish...not a bad thing but if you plan on goin professional id get your own stile

I'll admit, I did get a general idea of the style to make it from Em, but the song itself is completely mine. I like to think of it as my own "Kim" kinda, only shorter and there is an actual love verse in it. And two choruses.

[Enimee]

it was good nonetheless...keep at it