the dancer - poem

[ShadyAngel]

She dances in his daydreams
you can see the sparkle in his eyes
he loves the way she walks
and talks with words that fly

i only she would notice him
and dance within his arms
her body mesmorises him
locking him in charms

she moved around the fire
the flames lit up her eyes
he longed to reach beneath
her unconquerable disguise

she slyly slid toward him
pulling him up to dance
he stood pressed against her
turning cicles in trance


but she also longed to tell him
just the way he made her feel
this incredible longing
just really didnt seem real.

[Inzanity]

nice shit post some more up I like ur poem's

[ShadyAngel]

nice shit post some more up I like ur poem's

really?

thanx!

i will post i a couple mins x

[C-Game]

yea same as EP said
its sweet and cute like u
if u can make em a lil stronger and complex it wld be cool as well

[ShadyAngel]

thanx

yeah propz for the advice
iusually write em in a rush so i can get my feelings out, my poem about emily is way more deeper tho, i cry wheever i read it.