here you go

by **Ka0t1c** » Jan 2nd, '07, 00:29

you're gonna wish ya didnt spit any rap
cuz I'm fed up with your bullshit that gets said

who ya kiddin, I am a man who would never bow down, I will stand
and go ahead, try me now while I'm right in your path

you wanna fight til ya left in the site of a bloodbath?
then tonight come n step to the mic or write something to bite back

because I like it when ya try to act mighty in ya rhyming tracks
but you're not the guy on the site I'll find here to bypass

while I'm at a time in my life to survive tests
you're dying inside from your high stress cuz your mind's in a blind mess

are ya confined from the line designed to divide, yes?
or do ya hide by bendin ya lies thru sendin us an internet virus?

I'd give ya my debt to minus from mine but I did sign my individual contract
so my mission won't slide out the picture just yet

I got to adventure subjects considered to be censored from the public
but I'd rather rewind than to deliver my promise

so remember Kaotic, I never surrendered once and I'll spit til off topic
because I live for this constant lyrical comment I've risen on up til I'm hittin the bottom

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 2nd, '07, 01:03

it got next to no rythms :unsure:

by **Ka0t1c** » Jan 2nd, '07, 01:08

i rap it faster than u i guess

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 2nd, '07, 01:16

Kaotic wrote:i rap it faster than u i guess

probly

you should structure it the way you spit it

by **Ka0t1c** » Jan 2nd, '07, 01:20

i would if i knew how to

by **MoBrat** » Jan 2nd, '07, 01:43

you're gonna wish ya didnt spit any rap
cuz I'm fed up with your bullshit that gets said
who ya kiddin, I am a man who would never bow down, I will stand
and go ahead,

try me now while I'm right in your path
you wanna fight til ya left in the site of a bloodbath?
then tonight come n step to the mic or write something to bite back
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i think that might be how he spits the first few lines cause thats the only way i see it rhyming at the moment im not sure tho

by **Ka0t1c** » Jan 2nd, '07, 03:20

yeah, youre right

by **MoBrat** » Jan 2nd, '07, 05:25

you're gonna wish ya didnt spit any rap
cuz I'm fed up with your bullshit that gets said
who ya kiddin, I am a man who would never bow down, I will stand
and go ahead,

try me now while I'm right in your path
you wanna fight til ya left in the site of a bloodbath?
then tonight come n step to the mic or write something to bite back

because I like it when ya try to act mighty in ya rhyming tracks
but you're not the guy on the site I'll find here to bypass

while I'm at a time in my life to survive tests
you're dying inside from your high stress cuz your mind's in a blind mess
are ya confined from the line designed to divide, yes?
or do ya hide by bendin ya lies thru sendin us an internet virus?

I'd give ya my debt to minus from mine but I did sign my individual contract
so my mission won't slide out the picture just yet

I got to adventure subjects considered to be censored from the public
but I'd rather rewind than to deliver my promise

so remember Kaotic, I never surrendered once and I'll spit til off topic
because I live for this constant lyrical comment I've risen on up til I'm hittin the bottom

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ok i believe i got it all now....Kaotic let me know if im wrong here cause im just guessing this is how u spit it 2 make it rhyme right :sweating:

by **Ka0t1c** » Jan 2nd, '07, 09:17

I guess that's right

by **MoBrat** » Jan 2nd, '07, 09:19

u guess

haven't u been around here 4 like a lot longer then me?? and ur still unsure :confusion:

anyways sorry off topic i'll stop posting here

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