"Wounded Soul" a quick little poem it's very perso

[Inzanity]

I realize my hope I lost it as I walk away broken hearted
my heart is turning in circles my soul is burning in hurt yo
I waited for ur call I stayed up all night and bawled
with so much pain within my veins just crawled
as I weeped into my pillow, the pain creeped into my still soul
with the phone beside my bed, and thought's of us inside my head
but the phone never rang and u never called,
so now I'm alone in this pain as I forever bawl
u thought that I would just love and leave
but I told u it won't happen as long as u keep loving me
but now u stoped so let this be my last goodbye
as I do my best to let go of the past and cry

[Rae]

that was good ... (it sounds like sumthin i would "try" to write) lol
it had great rhyming and ok flow ...

keep it up

[sinemm]

wwooww
really nicee..n deep..
liked it alot..
cheers

[Inzanity]

propz for the feed any1 else??

[Inzanity]

*bump*

[Kez]

Nice multies and concept.

[C-Game]

yea EP some nice multies thr u got

[MoBrat]

damn i liked it nice multies and good flow keep up the good work

[Inzanity]

propz for the feedback