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sick-o-matic(second part added)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 1st, '07, 15:57

this is a work in progress :sweating:


sick-o-matic like your hair a trick to static my rythms dramatic,
flow in time automatic, im real, you just a prime fanatic,
see your neck a snap it, now check, a rap it no guess a tap it,
you spit shit a spit wit dont quit just admit my rythms transmit,
through your mind and time but a dont mind this crime,
this is just like climb and practice and my rythms like cactus,
stinging you in the back bringing you till you crack, like get back,
a dont threat that a dont sweat that infact forget that,
a rap like a brat, keep everything for myself to gnaw at,
and a self confess that, ma skill, no one posses that,
a aint religous but god bless that ma rythms were the sick-o-matic at,


and for the ppl who like to see the rythms..since i got plenty of haters :8)

sick-o-matic like your hair a trick to static my rythms dramatic,
flow in time automatic, im real, you just a prime fanatic,
see your neck a snap it, now check, a rap it no guess a tap it,
you spit shit a spit wit dont quit just admit my rythms transmit,
through your mind and time but a dont mind this crime,
this is just likeclimb and practice and my rythms like cactus,
stinging you in the back bringing you till you crack, like get back,
a dont threat that a dont sweat that infact forget that,
a rap like a brat, keep everything for myself to gnaw at,
and a self confess that, ma skill, no one posses that,
a aint religous but god bless that ma rythms were the sick-o-matic at,


i hate bolding it but haters will hate


also its a work in progress i wanne get 3 verses then get a beat and make a track wid it

please leave feed


second part


im sick-o-matic you second grade spitters have had it,
a spit bitter and tragic infact a spit glitter its magic,
i aint a quitter so youve had it a stick in like a gad bit,
and am glad it split you in the middle, tune you up like a fiddle,
then confuse you with ma riddle, twiddle dum twiddle dee,
im the only sick spitting scottish emcee,
and a acomplish thee on my own, just me.
sick-o-matic aint a tactic its erratic leaves you ecstatic,
like a ashmatic acrobatic, with no lines or track at it,
a put effort in so i aint stopping now , i aint flopping now,
ma lyrics disavow then annoy you like a goal disallow,



LEAVE FEED!!!!!!!!
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Postby yoshi » Jan 1st, '07, 17:50

make an audio now :8) :shifty:
Maybe wrote:I'm so awesome, I don't mind looking desperate.

Chet wrote:Fuck House. If I wanted to watch a sarcastic person in the medical field, I would stalk Yoshi :8)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 1st, '07, 18:44

thx yoshi :D


bump added second part
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 2nd, '07, 02:06

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Postby yoshi » Jan 2nd, '07, 21:20

you could audio 2nd part too. :shifty:
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Postby DC4952 » Jan 3rd, '07, 08:38

nicely done, i like it. from the looks of it, it cud be just u on the audio. ill pm u the beat weneva u need it
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