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Diss to Wanna be Pinoy / Balla / Rapper

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Diss to Wanna be Pinoy / Balla / Rapper

Postby Inches » Jan 3rd, '07, 22:45

joey thwaites i got your girl, it aint time to play,
i aint afraid to punch her face till her head decays,
i know you afraid that im really gonna hurt her,
but i still lure you out here with a quarter punder burger!
your ass steps outside and i wave the philipine flag free-ly,
get ya native ass inside and masturbate inside your teepee!
Aha! dont try to slang words like the south,
your rhymes is weaker than the "Grillz" in ya mouth!
and ya half an hour song, gonna irritate my ass like a thong,
it takes 2 flips and a khmer to show your ass your fuckin wrong!
im ready to destroy, ill rip ya head like a toy,
your crossed the line when you said you was pinoy!
well you can try to increase your luck and take a trip to reno,
but i got the 5 main reasons that you aint philipino,
(1) you aint flip or spic, just look at your dick!
got circumsized by ya tribe to be the god of toothpicks!
(2)you claim you balla, but you cant see where the rock passes,
even though you glasses bigger than a black girls ass is!
(3) your 'ghetto' clothes dont match, a definite no-no,
your (4)>fat ass hangs out, so we classify you "HOMO"<(5)
yup thats all, see ya fuckin chugger ass later!
take the tweezer off ya dick, you chronic masturbater!


i posted a bout this guy a while back if anyone ones to see it look in backstage its under "im gonna kill this fool"

comments please
Last edited by Inches on Jan 13th, '07, 20:35, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby rhiannon » Jan 3rd, '07, 22:50

:laughing:that was sick n funny as nice work inches!
I LIKE SLIMMY
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Postby Inches » Jan 3rd, '07, 22:50

oh yeah and this is going to be an audio with some friends and were sending it to the guy
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Postby Inches » Jan 3rd, '07, 22:51

rhiannon wrote::laughing:that was sick n funny as nice work inches!


haha thanks
recording in about 5 minutes

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Postby Inches » Jan 3rd, '07, 23:37

over 30 views and only 1 person comments

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 3rd, '07, 23:55

nice shit if you want me to clean up your stuff send me in on msn :smoking: or you could giv me it to mix ( im needing practice lol obv if it sucked you dont ened to use it )
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Postby D@vid » Jan 3rd, '07, 23:59

beginning was aight, but it kinda fell apart at the end.
Life is just one big lesson
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Postby Inches » Jan 4th, '07, 00:00

Bar wrote:nice shit if you want me to clean up your stuff send me in on msn :smoking: or you could giv me it to mix ( im needing practice lol obv if it sucked you dont ened to use it )


i recorded it but im not sure im gonna use it

ill send it to you anyways
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Postby C-Game » Jan 4th, '07, 18:46

send me a wma version to
and some nice rhymes inchy
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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 4th, '07, 19:34

This rates good as a concept piece but I've seen u dis people harder but this still more than got tha job done. ~1~
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Postby Inches » Jan 5th, '07, 00:03

thanks for readin all
and i know this isnt very good work,
but im just startin to write again

watcah out for the tourney
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Postby Restlesswon » Jan 6th, '07, 04:01

nice one man,ill lines in there

chugger ass

Lol
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Postby Inches » Jan 13th, '07, 20:09

aha this mofucka bought plastic grillz off ebay and wears em to school...
adding lines about that in a sec
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 13th, '07, 20:10

Inches wrote:aha this mofucka bought plastic grillz off ebay and wears em to school...
adding lines about that in a sec


hahahaahahaahahahahahahahahahaha

what a fucking queer
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Postby Kez » Jan 13th, '07, 20:15

What Steve said :laughing:
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