just a little rap, what yas think?

[xariuss]

you've never heard it
so much before it was burned in
turn-in the grave to burn in
swervin, swearin, till i fell in the furnace
eye balls meltin tryin to close the curt-ins
it's the mornin, turn-in into a burdon
no one wants me includin the fucken mormans
what a world to be born-in
foreign, worlds all being stormed in
by a power supposed to be held back by the lord'n
justice, just a word to bust us
the innocent dieing, the rich abundence
holdin the power ment for the average joe
tryin to live cleverish though
money supposivley doesn't bring laughter and joy
i'll murder ya wife and then after ya boys
maybe your money won't meen as much as laughter and joy?

[Restlesswon]

nice lines,u makin that into an audio?

[xariuss]

i use to do audios a while back and posted em on here.. i probally will make it an audio, would u like me to upload some of my old stuff?

[Inzanity]

nice shit man u should deffenitly make it an audio

[MoBrat]

i agree nice lines it got better as i read but u should do an audio or throw some of the old stuff up i wouldn't mind seeing how u do on audio

[stevethetruth]

nice rap dude you got some pretty good rhymes in there an audio would be cool lol

DO ONE!!!

[Rae]

nice rap dude you got some pretty good rhymes in there an audio would be cool lol

DO ONE!!!

i agree ...

i've neva seen u post in here b4 ...

u should post more often

keep it up hunn

[Vettori]

HAHA whats up, havnt heard from u in a while. Nice Bars man I can say Improvement welcome back

[Enimee]

it sucked u suck and everyone who posted saying it was good sucks...





SIIKE it was iight keep it up

[xariuss]

if u go check out audio storage i've uplaoded those 2 old songs of mine

i've decided to record that verse in the first post, ill change it around a little in the audio though, it'll be better