I'm Sorry

by **Rae** » Jan 9th, '07, 02:26

This is me singing the chorus (i havent finished tha verses yet ... b/c my throat is sore) and i'll prob. try to re-do the chorus when my throat is betta

imsorry2.wav - 3.29MB (this 1 goes in and out ... i thought it was just my computer lol)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/p1kf0t (this is tha same thing ... but hopefully it plays right

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(chorus)
Im sorry
I don

by **Enimee** » Jan 9th, '07, 02:31

Enimee says:
its really good
Enimee says:
you sound very beautiful on this

by **Hoopz** » Jan 9th, '07, 02:36

Ghost...Tha Mix King wrote:Hoopz says:
its really good
Hoopz says:
you sound very beautiful on this

by **stevethetruth** » Jan 9th, '07, 02:46

all those changes were helped by me

:D:D:D lmao jp

good job for your first full song

by **Enimee** » Jan 9th, '07, 02:48

..wow thats really awkward and its a bit annoying.....good job rae...god damn wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

by **Rae** » Jan 9th, '07, 02:55

Enimee wrote:..wow thats really awkward and its a bit annoying.....good job rae...god damn wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

uhh whats that suppost 2 mean? :unsure:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 9th, '07, 03:59

Rae wrote:
Enimee wrote:..wow thats really awkward and its a bit annoying.....good job rae...god damn wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

uhh whats that suppost 2 mean?

he an arsehole let ihm go

anywae all i got to say is...dam i listened to the hook im goin to rea dlyrics in a second but dam rae howocme you never told meyou got such a good singing voice i really like it hit that on a sick beat and dam really good singing rae :worship:

we are having a collab soon

dam straight we having one :worship:

ill read the lyrics now

by **Rae** » Jan 9th, '07, 04:02

Bar wrote:
Rae wrote:
Enimee wrote:..wow thats really awkward and its a bit annoying.....good job rae...god damn wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow

uhh whats that suppost 2 mean?

he an arsehole let ihm go

anywae all i got to say is...dam i listened to the hook im goin to rea dlyrics in a second but dam rae howocme you never told meyou got such a good singing voice i really like it hit that on a sick beat and dam really good singing rae

we are having a collab soon dam straight we having one

ill read the lyrics now

awww thanx hunn that means alot ...

yeah we could def. do a collab

just hit me up wheneva

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 9th, '07, 04:05

the lyrics are nice but i wanne know how you doing it my advice is this

i dunno if you plan to rap or sing but id sing

simple rythming skills with a good voice work alot in actual music these days especially with female artists so id

have first verse singing

chorus

second verse singing

chorus twice

thrid verse singing

chorus

me on a verse

chorus twice

na j/p

but you got to make sure the chorus is mixed real well coz a song like the with a hook catchy like this si what maes them great...search most artsist in uk atm that sing the main part of there song is there chorus with sort verses he excact same wya you wrote this hit the chorus good wih nice little verses and it should be awesome

cant wait to here it :worship:

and we defo doing a collab soon

i also wanne get you donw for some OOOOhhh and AHHHHHH singers do ( there great for mixing in with a rap chorus lol

peace rae :worship:

( i wrote alot :'(

)

by **Hoopz** » Jan 9th, '07, 05:24

Bar wrote:the lyrics are nice but i wanne know how you doing it my advice is this

i dunno if you plan to rap or sing but id sing

simple rythming skills with a good voice work alot in actual music these days especially with female artists so id

have first verse singing

chorus

second verse singing

chorus twice

thrid verse singing

chorus

me on a verse

chorus twice

na j/p

but you got to make sure the chorus is mixed real well coz a song like the with a hook catchy like this si what maes them great...search most artsist in uk atm that sing the main part of there song is there chorus with sort verses he excact same wya you wrote this hit the chorus good wih nice little verses and it should be awesome

cant wait to here it

and we defo doing a collab soon

i also wanne get you donw for some OOOOhhh and AHHHHHH singers do ( there great for mixing in with a rap chorus lol

peace rae

( i wrote alot )

lmao such an ass kisser

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 9th, '07, 05:36

Hoopz wrote:
Bar wrote:the lyrics are nice but i wanne know how you doing it my advice is this

i dunno if you plan to rap or sing but id sing

simple rythming skills with a good voice work alot in actual music these days especially with female artists so id

have first verse singing

chorus

second verse singing

chorus twice

thrid verse singing

chorus

me on a verse

chorus twice

na j/p

but you got to make sure the chorus is mixed real well coz a song like the with a hook catchy like this si what maes them great...search most artsist in uk atm that sing the main part of there song is there chorus with sort verses he excact same wya you wrote this hit the chorus good wih nice little verses and it should be awesome

cant wait to here it

and we defo doing a collab soon

i also wanne get you donw for some OOOOhhh and AHHHHHH singers do ( there great for mixing in with a rap chorus lol

peace rae

( i wrote alot )

lmao such an ass kisser

let me be with my ass kissing :laughing:

by **Hoopz** » Jan 9th, '07, 05:38

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 9th, '07, 06:37

I liked it it has a message never forget tha message

by **sinemm** » Jan 9th, '07, 09:42

oh thats cool hun n u sound nice

by **Rae** » Jan 9th, '07, 12:02

hey thanx everybody

lmao @ sum of what Bar said

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