In da' Hood

by **Aft3rmath** » Jan 14th, '07, 15:59

Im not exactly a good song writer but im better at makn beats lol but heres another one---->

Times a change, players get old, cheaten doesnt work no more, people are livin in the cold, fighten over boxes, and and purses they stole,

they stare at passing cars as if they were alienated to there lives in the hood, they could tell you there aint no use living this way, it isnt good,

So why are we just standen around while a mother struggles to raise her child, we look at them as if they were straight from the wild,

Thats ok treat them like animals, all they doin' is try to live, be something in life, wishn that they went back to being a kid,

Gun shots break outta the night, no one is scared cause they know its not there fight,

If only we gave them a seconds glance, maybe killin, and fighten to live wouldnt be there only chance,

Yo all we do is segregate, and seperate, thats the way are families today are raised,

Times have changed, there no good, sooner or later you will realise we all live in a hood.

by **stevethetruth** » Jan 14th, '07, 17:04

dude this was better than the other i am liking both but i am feeling this one more

good stuff for real lol

saw a multi in there btw lol
:worship:

good stuff keep posting em :8)

by **Big-T** » Jan 14th, '07, 21:56

i like it . u can tell a good story/do good description. Well dun

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 14th, '07, 21:58

nice shit man :worship:

and if you good at making beats you up for helping me with my EP :sweating:

by **TiFFany08** » Jan 15th, '07, 03:40

i like it, its pretty good.

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 15th, '07, 04:36

not bad

by **Aft3rmath** » Jan 15th, '07, 17:05

Thanks guys, ill b writen more soon, As for the beats i have not really had the time to make any useful ones, college is killen me, but ill ge the time.

by **Inzanity** » Jan 15th, '07, 17:35

dam that was sick nice job

by **lenaespiritodefogo** » Jan 16th, '07, 21:45

it's really good!!!!!!!!!! you got really nice ryhmes there, and it flows nicely, what do you mean you ain't a good song writter???? lol

by **Enimee** » Jan 19th, '07, 13:04

uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
u suck
no hate but
u suck
u don know shit about the hood...
some people need to be shut down sometimes so here is your turn
dont write no more
give up
make your beats
but you cant write
u suck

by **DC4952** » Jan 25th, '07, 05:09

Enimee wrote:uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
u suck
no hate but
u suck
u don know shit about the hood...
some people need to be shut down sometimes so here is your turn
dont write no more
give up
make your beats
but you cant write
u suck

wow that was harsh

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 25th, '07, 05:36

Harsh is what I do 2 Enimee when he tries 2 dis me

keep droppin aft3rmath

by **MoBrat** » Jan 25th, '07, 13:26

Rain Matrix wrote:Harsh is what I do 2 Enimee when he tries 2 dis me

keep droppin aft3rmath

ok well first off not bad but i hate how the industry has everyone rapping about "the hood" :shakehead:

by **D_Block** » Jan 25th, '07, 20:13

thanks.nice one. :worship:

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