alright here is goes it has now been two weeks since my grandpa pased away :cry: and i was writitng this i showed to three people, 2 girls and 1 boy, one girl had a tear in her eye, and this was only half completed, the other girl nealy cryed, the one boy suggested it i should record this some time

but anways here it goes
1st of Jan....2007....tragety stroke
it teared me appart, he took on deep breath and then he was gone
everytime i came round you always had a smile on your face and always in a happy mood
you are my strength to writte these words and now i'm good.
it teared me appart when you were gone that's why today i sit here all alone, looking out the window watching my days go by
cos i never sed that last good bye!
But in your memorie i'll make you proud
i'll be whatever i whish
cos i'll always say it like this
chourus:
Rest in peace grandad....i promise to make you proud... i'll do what you ahve always told me, to never take any bullshit from anyone
and never let them mother fuckers bring me down.
you always picked me up when i fell over
took me in your arms and my crying was over
you always sed that you wud watch over me,
and even today you are looking from above at who i can be.
1st of Jan, so many tears i cryed,
but today i know that you'll always be by side
watching over me, looking after me
and one day i'll make you proud, you will see.
you helped me to become the person who i am today
so when ever i look back, i will always say...
(chorus)
sometimes i whish i cud see ya again like in those times
cos then i wudn't be sitting writting these ryhmes,
i wudn't be cryin' i wud be happy and smilin'
so it's true what they sed all along
that you don't know what ya got til it's gone
and it was from that day i found what i had lost
but for all those tears and all the struggle
for all them bad days and all that trubble
i will always remember who you were so....
(chorus)
one day granpa....one day...... you will see me
becoming who i wanna be....i'll mkae you prud
i'll never let you down
Rest in peace
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