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Now You Know Us

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Now You Know Us

Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 22nd, '07, 04:18

[Verse 1] [R.T.K]
Alright now I know you used to my serious shit
But now we about to drop a brand new hit
Me and Bubba B rockin' this fuckin' place
And if you sleepin' we gone wake you up post-haste
'Cause we on some random shit don't know what we sayin'
Whachu say man you thought his name was Wayne?
Where the fuck you get that shit from man this is a intro
And we blowin' yo fuckin' brains out yo

[Chorus] [R.T.K] (Bubba B) [2X]
Iight this is the intro welcome to Bubba B (Bubba B bitch)
He writin' some shit you never heard G (You never heard me)
We rappin' some dope shit you ain't (When you hear us you gone faint)
And if you don't know what we sayin' stop sniffin that paint

[Both] BYATCH!

[Verse 2] [Bubba B]
Yeahhhhhhh, I know you heard of me sir
im the fuckin' sickest in Da Burgh'
always in the club and smokin' some bud
412 till i fuckin' die i stay as high as the sky
no mutha' fuckin' lie
when you see me with my strap you know you gonna die
mutha fuckas hatin on me
but the problem is they never had a girl on her knees

[Chorus] [R.T.K] (Bubba B) [2X]
Iight this is the intro welcome to Bubba B (Bubba B bitch)
He writin' some shit you never heard G (You never heard me)
We rappin' some dope shit you ain't (When you hear us you gone faint)
And if you don't know what we sayin' stop sniffin paint

[Verse 3] [R.T.K] (Bubba B)
Now you know who he is the names Bubba B bitch
(Don't be fuckin' hatin prick)
Allow me to re-introduce myself I'm R.T.K
(He'll blow yo ass away)
I'm usually on some serious shit but now we just fuckin' around
(You know how this mothafucka sound)
We 'bout to end this shit with no warning at all
(This crazy shit is off the walls)

[Chorus] [R.T.K] (Bubba B) [4X]
Iight this is the intro welcome to Bubba B (Bubba B bitch)
He writin' some shit you never heard G (You never heard me)
We rappin' some dope shit you ain't (When you hear us you gone faint)
And if you don't know what we sayin' stop sniffin paint

[Outro][R.T.K]
Yeah. Now you know this fucker. His names Bubba B.
Don't forget the name, you'll see it again soon.

PEACE!
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Postby Rae » Jan 22nd, '07, 04:21

wow i like it you guys!

it didnt take ya'll long to write that either ... well it didnt seem like it did.

keep it up!

and keep postin ur stuff ;)
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Postby B.A.D. » Jan 22nd, '07, 04:40

hey... that's good shit right there
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 22nd, '07, 04:44

not bad for what it was but the verses could've been longer :sweating:
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 22nd, '07, 06:16

Thanks y'all appreciate the feed. This was the first song we did a collabo on so I wasn't sure how it'd turn out but apparently it's good!


steverocks88 wrote:not bad for what it was but the verses could've been longer :sweating:


Yeah that's what I was thinkin' but we didn't wanna make 'em too long you know and I didn't wanna try and outdo him or anything since this is only his intro then I didn't wanna y'know make longer verses or anything. But our next one will have longer lines and better rhymes.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 22nd, '07, 10:49

some nice shit , kool concept and stuff, flow seemed tight aswell hook was nice :D maybe just work on your complexity apart form that it was good shit :D keep it up man, cant wait till you get audio set up :8)
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 22nd, '07, 22:45

Bar wrote:some nice shit , kool concept and stuff, flow seemed tight aswell hook was nice :D maybe just work on your complexity apart form that it was good shit :D keep it up man, cant wait till you get audio set up :8)


Thanks man neither can I :p. I'm thinkin' thats my next goal, expand my vocab so I can further expand my complexity of my rhymes (wow the dictionary does work!) and make the delivery a bit better.
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Postby TiFFany08 » Jan 23rd, '07, 02:20

it sounds pretty good
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 24th, '07, 02:44

TiFFany08 wrote:it sounds pretty good


Thanks :D it took us about an hour to write it ('bout 30 min each) and it apparently turned out pretty good!
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Postby Flamez » Jan 24th, '07, 08:08

pretty good i like it :8)
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good song

Postby phenomenon » Jan 24th, '07, 18:17

it was dope ,keep on writing fire
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