Bar - Warning

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 26th, '07, 14:19

http://www.zshare.net/audio/bar-warning-mp3.html

took 12 minutes to make :8)

dont mention my name again

by **Coccoa** » Jan 26th, '07, 14:58

U was off beat most of the time. Gotta work on it.

by **Restlesswon** » Jan 26th, '07, 15:07

lyrics good,but u gota speak up Imo

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 26th, '07, 15:15

Coccoa wrote:U was off beat most of the time. Gotta work on it.

only bit i know were i went off beat badly was the end :sweating:

but thanx for checking

@RS , thanx for checking :worship:

yeh i know its got loads of shit wrong with it i couldnt be bothered with it just done it quick coz i had to :sweating:

lol, i should re recorded it lol :sweating:

by **mart85** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:02

yeah it wasn't flawless, like the others said, but for a song made in 12 minutes, it's quite good lol... your flow could be more on point but overall it's nice...

btw, I kinda feel responsible for all the gun shots at the end lol :whistle:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:06

mart85 wrote:yeah it wasn't flawless, like the others said, but for a song made in 12 minutes, it's quite good lol... your flow could be more on point but overall it's nice...

btw, I kinda feel responsible for all the gun shots at the end lol

roflmao lol thanx yeh it aint to great but i wasnt let it go unoticed like it says just a warning lol

thanx for checking :worship:

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:13

Bar is Tame please I'll Bar yur Name as Hard as I Came u'd think u were a Tard in this Game I'ma Star with my Brain don't Spar with Rain I'll Crush yur Dreams 2 Rush yur Scene then Up it Bigger a lil Touch 4 this Trigger yur out of Luck go Figure Duck or get Hit Word I'm Mental Right Now u a Rental Fight Oww

I don't need 2 give warnings every 1 knows I grow with my flow like oh no call popo I'll go loco and show them a fo fo like I how I close foes or those opposed stay on yur toes

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:14

Rain Matrix wrote:Bar is Tame please I'll Bar yur Name as Hard as I Came u'd think u were a Tard in this Game I'ma Star with my Brain don't Spar with Rain I'll Crush yur Dreams 2 Rush yur Scene then Up it Bigger a lil Touch 4 this Trigger yur out of Luck go Figure Duck or get Hit Word I'm Mental Right Now u a Rental Fight Oww

keep the text shit in rap battles prik

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:18

Oh u want an audio attack bitch okay

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:20

Rain Matrix wrote:Oh u want an audio attack bitch okay

wtf is the point in you :confusion:

by **MoBrat** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:32

so far what i heard was good good flow and good disses even tho this is meant 4 me im gonna leave feed but my internet is fucking up a lot and it's hard 2 do anything right now but when i get the internet working right i'll leave more feed......

by **ThomasAguanis** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:42

pretty good track man. You had some good rhymes in it. Shit talking was good haha. gunshots and the random noises at the end were a bit much to me but it was still alright. Keep it up man. :8)

Rain Matrix wrote:Oh u want an audio attack bitch okay

@ you randomly coming in this thread and starting shit with bar :laughing:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:54

ThomasAguanis wrote:pretty good track man. You had some good rhymes in it. Shit talking was good haha. gunshots and the random noises at the end were a bit much to me but it was still alright. Keep it up man.

Rain Matrix wrote:Oh u want an audio attack bitch okay

@ you randomly coming in this thread and starting shit with bar

you just cant understand my devil voice lol

thx for checking man :worship:

by **Rain Matrix** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:56

Is TA still in tha tourney or did i make him my bitch already?

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jan 26th, '07, 19:58

Rain Matrix wrote:Is TA still in tha tourney or did i make him my bitch already?

what the fucks up your humph ?

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