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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 26th, '07, 23:30

I got a Chamber 4 these Strangers, u don't have 2 b Gangsta 2 know Danger/
I play Russian Roulette like I'm Uppin tha Threat or Touching Regrets, why Change Words//
Spin Click In This Deminished Minute tha Clock Taunts as I Chose 2 Post/
it's Nonsense tha Contents of my Drop Haunts, I'll Stop Wants and Close as a Ghost//
my Mind Erodes Time 2 Reload, 5 in 1 Free I'm Alive it's Funny time to Roll tha Revolver/
Hand 2 Steel how I Planned 2 Feel, Man it's Real, 2 Damaged to Conceal my Soul at tha Alter//
my Digit Squeeze's, I Fidgit and Can't Believe It, I'm Still Hurting like an Ill Person/
pain If It Percieves, Illicit Scenes will Visit Dreams cuz Nightmares don't Fight Fair 4 Ceartin//

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wonder where my Knowledge Went
u can Call It Descent
trying 2 Abolish whats Recent
I've Demolished Decent
I'm just Crawling 2 a Reason

5 Bullets Remain I'll Pull It 4 tha Pain, it's Control without a Name no Strings Attached/
Golden Silence I'm Holding Violence in my Calm Palms it's Gone Wrong, can't Bring it Back//
Where r my Friends I'm There again Aware of tha End who'll rememeber this Bastard After Can it B/
Lost my Girl all Across tha World I hear tha Laughter of Disaters Insanity has made a Man of Me//
Fuck Fear my Abrupt Tears don't matter Up Here I'm in a Protective Space/
my State of Mind left Great Behind why Take my Time in a Projected Place//
I'm Firing My Gun Conspiring 2 Die Young, it's 2 Tiring Why Run my Hands r Full/
my Brain Aches, I didn't Train 2 Break as it Complains I Wait, my plots not Cancelled//

no Acknowledgements
wonder where my Knowledge Went
u can Call It Descent
trying 2 Abolish whats Recent
I've Demolished Decent
I'm just Crawling 2 a Reason

as Quick as I Can, Click Dam I Think on tha Brink what story will I Paint Now /
Frustrated I've Waited Complacent in my Basement with another Blank Round//
I Sit Back, I Admit That, my Fix is Bad, but this Trip is all I Have/
I Get Relaxed, hoping It's a Wrap with a reload Kit in my Lap//
If I Load 1 More, my Road is Done 4, Deadly Is being Ready 2 Quit/
I Hold my Fate, Cold I Concentrate, I Know it's 2 Late so I Steady tha Sixth//
2day it seemed Odd 2 Wake, so I Nod as my body Shakes, this is no Act Gang/
Miserable with a Pistol, a Rapper Concerned tha Laughter Returns, Clack Bang!//

no Acknowledgements
wonder where my Knowledge Went
u can Call It Descent
trying 2 Abolish whats Recent
I've Demolished Decent
I'm just Crawling 2 a Reason
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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 27th, '07, 00:18

No emotion huh? I'm not lyrically any good huh? Fuck u this is 4 me anyway
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 27th, '07, 00:21

you do yourself no favours with posts like that^^^

just do your thing man and quit thinking the world hates you.This is all just a virtual world so dont forget that.If you wanna make rap music just do it and not make it out to be something it aint.

i liek the lyrics its not all that bad man just aint feeling your atitude atm.
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Postby Sophie » Jan 27th, '07, 00:28

$0 R3@L wrote:you do yourself no favours with posts like that^^^

just do your thing man and quit thinking the world hates you.This is all just a virtual world so dont forget that.If you wanna make rap music just do it and not make it out to be something it aint.

i liek the lyrics its not all that bad man just aint feeling your atitude atm.


agree wit this guy. :shifty:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 27th, '07, 00:31

shadysbabi wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:you do yourself no favours with posts like that^^^

just do your thing man and quit thinking the world hates you.This is all just a virtual world so dont forget that.If you wanna make rap music just do it and not make it out to be something it aint.

i liek the lyrics its not all that bad man just aint feeling your atitude atm.


agree wit this guy. :shifty:


its cause you love me right?

now get home and bake me cookies you sexy beast you :shifty: :flower: :worship:
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Postby Sophie » Jan 27th, '07, 00:48

$0 R3@L wrote:
shadysbabi wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:you do yourself no favours with posts like that^^^

just do your thing man and quit thinking the world hates you.This is all just a virtual world so dont forget that.If you wanna make rap music just do it and not make it out to be something it aint.

i liek the lyrics its not all that bad man just aint feeling your atitude atm.


agree wit this guy. :shifty:


its cause you love me right?

now get home and bake me cookies you sexy beast you :shifty: :flower: :worship:


yes its cos i love u :confusion: :p get of ur butt & make ur own cookies :tounge2: . in the cookie family every1 makes cookies :shifty: includin u :shifty: :p
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Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 27th, '07, 00:50

On tha real it's hard 2 have a good attitude when u feel like wasted talent

Any1 else with actual feed ignoring my intial rant post?
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 27th, '07, 00:52

shadysbabi wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:
shadysbabi wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:you do yourself no favours with posts like that^^^

just do your thing man and quit thinking the world hates you.This is all just a virtual world so dont forget that.If you wanna make rap music just do it and not make it out to be something it aint.

i liek the lyrics its not all that bad man just aint feeling your atitude atm.


agree wit this guy. :shifty:


its cause you love me right?

now get home and bake me cookies you sexy beast you :shifty: :flower: :worship:


yes its cos i love u :confusion: :p get of ur butt & make ur own cookies :tounge2: . in the cookie family every1 makes cookies :shifty: includin u :shifty: :p


imma go out and find me a new cookie wife me thinks :whistle: lmao your so tasty and your choco chips r to die for....so i dunno ,imma sleep on it.
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Postby Sophie » Jan 27th, '07, 00:56

$0 R3@L wrote:
shadysbabi wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:
shadysbabi wrote:
$0 R3@L wrote:you do yourself no favours with posts like that^^^

just do your thing man and quit thinking the world hates you.This is all just a virtual world so dont forget that.If you wanna make rap music just do it and not make it out to be something it aint.

i liek the lyrics its not all that bad man just aint feeling your atitude atm.


agree wit this guy. :shifty:


its cause you love me right?

now get home and bake me cookies you sexy beast you :shifty: :flower: :worship:


yes its cos i love u :confusion: :p get of ur butt & make ur own cookies :tounge2: . in the cookie family every1 makes cookies :shifty: includin u :shifty: :p


imma go out and find me a new cookie wife me thinks :whistle: lmao your so tasty and your choco chips r to die for....so i dunno ,imma sleep on it.


:( :'( no1 beats me as a cookie wife :shifty:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 27th, '07, 01:00

your right :flower: :flowers: :wub:
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Postby Sophie » Jan 27th, '07, 01:04

$0 R3@L wrote:your right :flower: :flowers: :wub:


i know i know :p :happy: i always am :laughing

we're off topic. :unsure: again. :laughing:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 27th, '07, 01:05

i know lmao

we shud hook up on msn :flower:
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Postby Sophie » Jan 27th, '07, 01:08

my laptops fucked :'( & i dnt have msn on this comp cos my parents wont let me have it on here cos its theirs & it takes up 2 much space & blah blah...i can go on web messenger though :unsure:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 27th, '07, 01:09

shadysbabi wrote:my laptops fucked :'( & i dnt have msn on this comp cos my parents wont let me have it on here cos its theirs & it takes up 2 much space & blah blah...i can go on web messenger though :unsure:


i dunno what that is :unsure: :sweating:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 27th, '07, 01:10

Rain Matrix wrote:On tha real it's hard 2 have a good attitude when u feel like wasted talent

Any1 else with actual feed ignoring my intial rant post?



wasted talent :laughing: your attitude cracks me up
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