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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 27th, '07, 18:15

The truth in booth saying ruthless shit, move it bitch
I lose it quick whatever mood I
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Postby Restlesswon » Jan 27th, '07, 19:40

thats some great work man, this getin the audio treatment?
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 27th, '07, 19:59

maybe not sure yet but thanks for checking it out man :happy:
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Postby MoBrat » Jan 27th, '07, 20:32

Restlesswon wrote:thats some great work man, this getin the audio treatment?


ya man this is some sick shit nice work steve
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 27th, '07, 21:14

MoBrat wrote:
Restlesswon wrote:thats some great work man, this getin the audio treatment?


ya man this is some sick shit nice work steve


thanks for the feedback dude
:happy:
and thanks a lot for checking it out man :D
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Postby B.A.D. » Jan 27th, '07, 21:25

shit

this is what I call a masterpiece...

ya really nice mayn..
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 27th, '07, 23:36

wow thanks bro that means a lot lol :D
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Postby Flamez » Jan 28th, '07, 08:27

that was great good work, had a good flow to it..i like it :happy:
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Postby C-Game » Jan 28th, '07, 09:17

some good multies which led to some added complexity
good stuff steve-O
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Postby sinemm » Jan 28th, '07, 15:08

w00t w00t thats coooll :happy:
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Postby 4D » Jan 28th, '07, 15:35

Definitely your most complex rhyme so far man, and first time I've seen you kick with multies. Great man, keep it up!! :smoking:
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Postby C-Game » Jan 28th, '07, 16:16

i know i posted but i have to say steve is gonna explode wit da comments wit happiness....coz his verse was kick ass

so here comes power hungry c-game and locks da topic and preventin from steve-0 receavin any good comments

gonna unlock once steve gets dat singin gal

*comes back in year 2025 and unlocks da topic...phew....

lol ;) ;)

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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 28th, '07, 19:49

C-Game wrote:i know i posted but i have to say steve is gonna explode wit da comments wit happiness....coz his verse was kick ass

so here comes power hungry c-game and locks da topic and preventin from steve-0 receavin any good comments

gonna unlock once steve gets dat singin gal

*comes back in year 2025 and unlocks da topic...phew....

lol ;) ;)

ignore me i am sick...tonsils :( need to use some poor humour :)


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your right c-game i am happy ha ha


thanks alot all of you :worship: for checking this out lol

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means a lot to get comments like this ha ha
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 28th, '07, 20:15

Sarah wrote:I saw this in exclusive :shifty: cos I'm special like that :toocool:



lmao



It's great Steve :D


so did i :tounge2:
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Postby C-Game » Jan 28th, '07, 20:18

Bar wrote:
Sarah wrote:I saw this in exclusive :shifty: cos I'm special like that :toocool:



lmao



It's great Steve :D


so did i :tounge2:



hmmmm
bar is upset coz sarah got an exclusive from steve and he wants da world to know he got an exclusive as well....hmmm jealousy...

and he wants pick names

and rhiannon said somethin abt wat happened on msn....


BAR???????????

dude wats wrong with ya......

ha ha j/p brother:)
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