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Postby Enimee » Jan 26th, '07, 21:12

Constant bickerin arguin and fightin its a delight to know your writin
but constantly i see competition around me your love is obviously the trophy
i cant win recant and try to make things better thats all i do
but now im sayin fuck this fuck that and oh yeah.....fuck you too

all my life i been tryna conquer
this will inside of me makes me wona drop her
and now i submit let the force take ova


i cant do this...fuck this rap shit this lame lyrics i try to pass off as songs
and fuck those who bite and those who cant leave well enough alone

its easy to see we all got talent and we all can try
but me im givin up submergin myself yall watch this man die











MY LAST RAP..ima finish tourney then i quit dunno why i posted here nothin better to do
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 26th, '07, 21:14

not bad dude


ood luck in the future :happy:
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Postby Enimee » Jan 26th, '07, 21:18

yeah
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Postby Rae » Jan 26th, '07, 21:47

nice rap...

im disapointed that its ur last.
hopefully you'll think about it and not stop rappin.
u dont have to post on TR. but i hope u still write.
b/c ur great @ it hunn. no matter what ppl on here say.
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Postby MoBrat » Jan 26th, '07, 22:40

BIG EDIT: fuck what i said before straight up if u wanna quit do it cause man im sick of all this shit that the world and losers try n do/say....
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Postby Rae » Jan 26th, '07, 22:51

yeah i agree.
i know we aint cool no more.
and we're never gonna b from now on.
but u shouldnt quit.
im sure that girl u like will like it too.
all girls do :sweating:
but yeah like i keep tellin you ...
you got talent. and u got the heart. (i think) but do u have the drive? (i think so) but u doubt urself to much.

dont quit. ;)
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Postby Enimee » Jan 27th, '07, 14:51

don say that ish there is no other girl...but i aint gettin in this ova tr fuck it mainly i wnna say ima stick round here and post some more ish but afta the tourney im gon

so get in your licks now while you got the chance
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Postby TheWeirdoIsBack » Jan 27th, '07, 16:55

Man that was deep shit...the kinda shit you can't make up. I ain't gonna try and change your mind or nothin' cause you know you do what you do...but I'd say keep writin' and hang here longer y'know. I mean I've lost girls to guys I never thought'd get a date...I've lost friends to people they met a week ago at the movies...bottom line: people I knew, or loved, fuck me over everytime. This piece was something sick, and if it really is your last then you went out in a blaze of glory. If you decide to stick around know that we got a whole network of people willing to talk to you and help you with anything, and I'm one 'em. If it sounds like I'm being a fuckin' soap opera, I apologize :sweating:
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Postby Marth » Jan 27th, '07, 23:13

good liryc, and don't stop!!!
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 27th, '07, 23:18

thank fuck one less annoying little person who thinks there eminem posting stuff on the forum :worship: my advice never start back up again :8)
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Postby Enimee » Jan 28th, '07, 03:07

i did what?
how bout you suck my...well you fil that in for yourself i kill yuou lyrically spiritually fuck i jus murda you in yur sleep bar your not the one too talk bout shit cause well you aint shit you wona battle me again or somin?
otherwise don tlk shit i don wnna embarrass you
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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 28th, '07, 03:09

Enimee wrote:i did what?
how bout you suck my...well you fil that in for yourself i kill yuou lyrically spiritually fuck i jus murda you in yur sleep bar your not the one too talk bout shit cause well you aint shit you wona battle me again or somin?
otherwise don tlk shit i don wnna embarrass you


umm no offense but i think it's the other way around lol

cause i've seen lyrics from both and bar comes out on top over you (no offense lol)
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Postby Enimee » Jan 28th, '07, 03:12

bar knows...thas all ima say....bar knows he aint stupid thats why he aint gon say shit he aint gon agree he aint commitin that carreer suicide
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 28th, '07, 03:20

Enimee wrote:i did what?
how bout you suck my...well you fil that in for yourself i kill yuou lyrically spiritually fuck i jus murda you in yur sleep bar your not the one too talk bout shit cause well you aint shit you wona battle me again or somin?
otherwise don tlk shit i don wnna embarrass you


firslty includin lyricly warfare tournament our record is me won 3 and you won 2 battles beween us so yeh im winning fuck you

bar knows...thas all ima say....bar knows he aint stupid thats why he aint gon say shit he aint gon agree he aint commitin that carreer suicide



ok well im syaing shit look SHIT SHIT SHIT please go kill my career bitch!! go for it i need a fucking luagh :laughing:

prik rememebr your diss to maybe...uhm im sititng hear dirnking coke...uh yeh go choke :laughing: dumb bitch that was some multi :8)
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Postby Enimee » Jan 28th, '07, 03:26

funny guy...sorry dont pay any attention to nothin you do so i cant quote cha ... oh and if yeah cause lyrical warfare was FAIR..i raped you i read your post and was like....huh...what...HUH!!!! it was a knockout wasnt it? idk if i can or cant go into specifics cause i don wnna get dq'd but chea
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