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My Alphabet Slaughter (A-I)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 31st, '07, 23:02

My Alphabet slaughter


Assasination in Accomidation of Alliteration Already pacin
like A Awry nation A Assume recomendation Around Audio Aberation

Bar Bouncing Back Bullets Blast Big Baller
Blood Bailing Body Bound Beyond Bother

Cowards Could Collide like Cowboys Could Ride
Carrer Called a Close lying Cloudy Colder you lose

Dastardly Devestating Dont Dare Deny David
Due to Decay David Lies Dead today

Extravagising Extravagansa Easily Elaborated beyond Enemy
Endure Enough Ether to Elaborate Each Error opens the Eye Evenly

Fasinating Fantasy Fastly Fucks with Fury Furiously
Follow Fear For Few Follow Freedom Fully

Getting a Grammy for Grammer i Grow Gladly
Greedy Genuis Goin Gorrila Gun sadly

Humor Hysteria Hardly Hydro However Heaviley
Hood Homo Had Highest Harmony steadily

Invade Industry Incarnation Immerse Insane Interior
Insanity In-bread humanity Insianly Superior





Will continue this but my head hurts

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Postby stevethetruth » Jan 31st, '07, 23:15

not bad man i'd like to see how it turns out on audio
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Postby Golden » Jan 31st, '07, 23:20

Great :d
Yeah...keep,keep it real
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 31st, '07, 23:59

Killa wrote:i dislike the idea of fully using someone elses concept to the point al you did was give it slightly new lyrics if u get me :sweating:

is o.k tho in its own sense would be 100 x better if you managed to keep each letter having A,B,C for everythin tho.


its on a complete practise basis, nothing more nothing less :sweating:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 1st, '07, 00:06

Killa wrote:if you launch a carrer off this ima KILL you :tounge2:



roflmao :laughing:

dont worry :happy: although if i like the outcome i might record :shifty: send them off to a couple of places :shifty: :laughing:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 1st, '07, 00:12

Killa wrote::( :'( :angry: :( :angry: :'( :angry: :tounge2: urrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh emotional moment rofl


want me to make you more emotional, i wrote all of that while listening to yor 5 minute track on repeat, i knwo every word...im a groupie :8) :flower: (no homo)
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Postby 4D » Feb 1st, '07, 16:31

Believe it or not I was doing something like this a few weeks ago, before I even heard about "Alphabetic Slaughter", I think I only got as far as D, should I post it, it wasn't even near finished.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 1st, '07, 16:46

FORDIE wrote:Believe it or not I was doing something like this a few weeks ago, before I even heard about "Alphabetic Slaughter", I think I only got as far as D, should I post it, it wasn't even near finished.


My brain says yes you should post it :sweating: my gut says no coz youll show me up :( lol nah you should :happy: imma work on this on tonight again :happy:
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Postby 4D » Feb 1st, '07, 17:05

Nah man, it's not great. And I only got as far as C.


I`m an architect of alphabetical apocalypse, performin assassination of assonance
Armed with alliteration, adverbs and adjectives, aiming audiences asses at an ambulance,
Achin with an earful a accidents, it appears that half a glance at my avalanchin affadavit,
Attacked the brain, burst the bubble of bullshit that brainwashed em, 'n' brought em back ta basics, back ta babies, back ta baskin in a basket naked, then I bring the baths n basins, to clean the crap caked in their craniums, and unclog the cogs in their chain of thought 'n captivate it, with calculated cataclysmic lyrics that crack a critics spirit, till tha cunt can't debate it, cus i can cuss till u concur that i concussed a couple a cussin cousins.....


That's as far as i got, pretty awful structure. Gave up on it, as soon as I found out about Papoose's track, me thinking I was on to a great concept for a rhyme. And that's no bullshit, I really did think of it before I heard his. ;)
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Postby Inches » Feb 1st, '07, 20:14

makes my head hurt

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