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Ashes In Tha Wind / Feed Wanted

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Ashes In Tha Wind / Feed Wanted

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 1st, '07, 10:05

u haters Love Yur Doubt, try 2 Cover my Mouth, Run Words Out
I'll Take Another Route, I could care less what Others About

I'm tha new Threat that won't Lose his Breath, Who Said I'm Useless
I'm so Ruthless, I leave tha Stupid Clueless thats tha only way 2 Do This

is there Truth Left, I know theres Youth Blessed, in this School of Text
tha News is a Mess, getting Thru 2 tha Rest, I say let tha Fools Guess

First is yur Birth, then we find out what it's Worth, tha clock Hurts
fakes in tha Dirt, real Mc's get Reimbursed when we return 2 tha Earth

Ashes in tha Wind
why Clash with yur Friends
get Past tha Sin
Ask tha questions Within
some Tasks wil b Grim
Ashes in tha Wind

Fear is Clear, when u look in tha Mirror, so keep priorities Near
some Peers will Steer yur Dear Carrer far away from Here

it will Disappear, I'm Made 2 Attack, I neva Play in tha Act
Weigh tha Facts, take a Day 2 Relax, b4 it Fades 2 Black

Say it Back, Write yur Thoughts, cuz Fights r Fought 4 Nothing
thru Types were Taught, what it's Like 2 b Caught in Something

Some nights I've Forgot, Running, a Wasted Retraction, 1 more Evasive Action
Tracing how it Happened, Faces not Matching, all thats left is a Place of Rapping

Ashes in tha Wind
why Clash with yur Friends
get Past tha Sin
Ask tha questions Within
some Tasks wil b Grim
Ashes in tha Wind

I'ma Hustla Must A Busta Touch Tha Crusher, watch time Pass By
u can Brush Keys but yur not 2 Much 4 Me no1 has 2 Ask Why

Fate Unchained, 518's Rain, can't Wait 2 Explain my Vision
Provisions of Wisdom, Missing Missions lead up 2 a Collision

Dust 2 Dust, Must we Fuss, 1 Chance, my Stance is Substantial
were all Life Holders, were all Dice Rollers, untill r 2morrows Canceled

Pride Talks, like Sidewalks we Hide drops 2 Try Not 2 Die Forgot
tha Varient is Where they went, it's Scary Men tha Ride 2 tha Top

I Keep tha Street, where we Beef with Police, and tha Heat can put u 2 Sleep
if u Beat Feat, u might b able 2 Weep in yur Sleep, theres nothing Deep about Deciet

Ashes in tha Wind
why Clash with yur Friends
get Past tha Sin
Ask tha questions Within
some Tasks wil b Grim
Ashes in tha Wind
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Feb 1st, '07, 17:20, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Ashes In Tha Wind "Unfinished"

Postby Marth » Feb 1st, '07, 12:34

depends on beat and stuff, but the rhymes are simple... and it reads forced
but it could be a nice song
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 1st, '07, 20:19

I'ma Hustla Must A Busta Touch Tha Crusher

SIMPLE! :zipped: , r u tryin 2 start anotha beef,no it's not that it's cuz I just called u out :shocked:
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