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by **sinemm** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:31

so tired of everything...jus bein hurt n lonely..
like havin the last day of life..waitin fort he moment to die patiently..
leavin everything behind but still not relieved..
wonderin why everythings gotta be that complicated n hard..
takin each step with fear..feelin uncomfortable..its takin me apart..
feeling everythings a mess..gettin more n more far away from my heart
whats worth livin for..tryin to get the answer..ur lost in the whirlpool
jus feelin ur breaking down.. goin deeper..n u cant rise again..ur bout to drown..
like it so ironic..sometimes u wanna ruin everything n make a new start..
without your fears n habits..just like in your childhood..
bein aware of nothing..in safety and innocent..havin sweet dreams at nights
when things started to change..? couldnt even notice..how n why..
tryin to be who you couldnt be before..dont want ppl to recognize u anymore
in somewhere else..nobody knows you and how much weak you are..
not lookin at you tryin to mean somethin..not actin different wit fake smiles
but will they ever leave you alone..?jus let you to live n die by your own?
its like something

by **Flamez** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:37

thats deep..i'm feeling that way..

by **sebastien** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:37

i'm sure there is a long and hard work back to it it would be difficult to rap that, i think it could be in the slam register

by **sinemm** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:39

sebastien wrote:i'm sure there is a long and hard work back to it it would be difficult to rap that, i think it could be in the slam register

wut u mean.. :unsure:

n thnx flamez

by **sebastien** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:41

i mean that singing that in rap would be diificult

BUT in slam (it's a way of singing like speaking but with rhyming like a poem) it woul be easy for you

by **sinemm** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:43

sebastien wrote:i mean that singing that in rap would be diificult

BUT in slam (it's a way of singing like speaking but with rhyming like a poem) it woul be easy for you

oh got it now..but i didnt write it to sing or rap..not gonna make an audio or sth

but thnx tho

by **sebastien** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:44

good

by **Shady Spain** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:49

Its good,like it.

by **sinemm** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:57

thanx

by **Sophie** » Feb 2nd, '07, 20:58

I like it it's good :happy:

by **sinemm** » Feb 2nd, '07, 21:04

aw thnx hun

by 4D » Feb 2nd, '07, 22:16

Deep, and sounds personal, very nice poem, with some pretty clever lines! :smoking:

by **Slimm** » Feb 3rd, '07, 00:22

very deep hun.. loved reading it

by **sinemm** » Feb 3rd, '07, 11:12

FORDIE wrote:Deep, and sounds personal, very nice poem, with some pretty clever lines!

awww glad to hear that from u Fordie thanx for ur comment

n n slimm thank u too alot hun

by **C-Game** » Feb 3rd, '07, 13:57

awww sinemm is doin poems and im lovin it

sweety i just skimmed through it coz im at a lab..gonna read da full thing later tonight

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