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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 4th, '07, 02:06

i was covering for a guy today so while i was bored i wrote this


i prevail lethel and de-rail people on a scale steep hill
you pale keep still a kill you with a ryhme
am flowing while you stiff in time you better dip this nine
before you dip in grime a dont commit a crime
a just commit this ryhme plain and simple
a make your brain look dimple as you cripple a snigger
haha wanne-be wigger, am quicker than jigga
and hit you the wigga a could say ______but that aint me,
freedom of speech but we aint even free
we all locked pissed in a cell its called system hell
you voice box out so you cant yell
battered so much you cant tell


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Re: Wrote this at work

Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 4th, '07, 02:07

Bar wrote:i was covering for a guy today so while i was bored i wrote this


i prevail lethel and de-rail epopleon a scale steep hill
you pale keep still a kill you with a ryhme
am flowing while you stiff in time you better dip this nine
before you dip in grime a dont commit a crime
a just commit this ryhme plain and simple
a make your barin look dimple as you criple a snigger
aha wanne-be *****, am quicker than jigga
and hit you thw ***** a could say ______but that aint me,
freedom of speech but we aint even free
we all locked pissed in a cell its called system hell
you voice box out so you cant yell
battered so much you cant tell


feed :happy:


u work now then?
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Postby Inches » Feb 4th, '07, 02:13

freedom of speech but we aint even free
we all locked pissed in a cell its called system hell


Big Ups On those lines,
good to see your improving man
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Re: Wrote this at work

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 4th, '07, 02:16

$0 R3@L wrote:
Bar wrote:i was covering for a guy today so while i was bored i wrote this


i prevail lethel and de-rail epopleon a scale steep hill
you pale keep still a kill you with a ryhme
am flowing while you stiff in time you better dip this nine
before you dip in grime a dont commit a crime
a just commit this ryhme plain and simple
a make your barin look dimple as you criple a snigger
aha wanne-be *****, am quicker than jigga
and hit you thw ***** a could say ______but that aint me,
freedom of speech but we aint even free
we all locked pissed in a cell its called system hell
you voice box out so you cant yell
battered so much you cant tell


feed :happy:


u work now then?


no i was covering for a guy that was of sick from my old job witch i got sacked from, its a off the books job so..yeh :sweating:

@inches thx


andt he ***** out words are W.igga or W.igger
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Re: Wrote this at work

Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 4th, '07, 03:04

no i was covering for a guy that was of sick from my old job witch i got sacked from, its a off the books job so..yeh :sweating:


why would a manager that 'sacked' you openly think of you as the first person to contact when one of his staff is sick???

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Re: Wrote this at work

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 4th, '07, 03:07

$0 R3@L wrote:
no i was covering for a guy that was of sick from my old job witch i got sacked from, its a off the books job so..yeh :sweating:


why would a manager that 'sacked' you openly think of you as the first person to contact when one of his staff is sick???

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you obviously dont know what off the books job is, technicaly i was never hired, and they asked me coz my mum works in his other shop and it was that one they needed someone for, and needed someone who knew what to do and quickly, and i needed the money
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 4th, '07, 03:17

you could be telling the truth but personally i think its a failed attempt to make yourself look not 'well-off' or a fickle attempt to look 'hood' i could be wrong but thats my opionion anyway like you said:

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Postby C-Game » Feb 4th, '07, 07:36

wat happend to ur carpets :( :(
me want my carpets :( :(
so sad :( :(

nice stuff bar....
thr were some meaningFULL lines ...
i meant in a good way where some lines gives a good msg

nice goin man
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 4th, '07, 15:14

$0 R3@L wrote:you could be telling the truth but personally i think its a failed attempt to make yourself look not 'well-off' or a fickle attempt to look 'hood' i could be wrong but thats my opionion anyway like you said:

freedom of speech



see thats what i mean with you, why you got this problem man, see the thing is you say all this stuff not knowing me or not even being on this forum before when i was never one coz i was always at work, what you want me to do go take a picture of the shitty street i live in go take pictures of pipers show you my mum working there, why you got this problem, fact is real i never lied on this forum and everyone knows i havent, and i got enough respect for people to beileve what they say untill proven wrong,

beileive what you want, really doesnt matter what you think
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Postby Sophie » Feb 4th, '07, 16:54

^ smh man what is wit u 2

oh & bar i like it :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 4th, '07, 17:00

Sophie wrote:^ smh man what is wit u 2

oh & bar i like it :happy:


thx :happy: but us 2, its more like him, i posted a honest bit of stuff to get some feed and he comes in and starts bullshit yet again, with his stupid ass pictures, and its not as if i can lie hes the one that started posting the bullshit, all anyone needs to do is scroll up and look

anywae thx for checking it :worship:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 4th, '07, 17:09

Sophie wrote:^ smh man what is wit u 2

oh & bar i like it :happy:


i dunno we just cant get on ever since the dude snapped at me for thinking his track had a hook and it didnt :whistle: .Oh wells i was pissed last night at you goin at me in that otha thread so yer.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 4th, '07, 18:38

$0 R3@L wrote:
Sophie wrote:^ smh man what is wit u 2

oh & bar i like it :happy:


i dunno we just cant get on ever since the dude snapped at me for thinking his track had a hook and it didnt :whistle: .Oh wells i was pissed last night at you goin at me in that otha thread so yer.


:unsure:

your weird :unsure:

im goin at you, coz you are tryna say in this thread that i didnt do a shift in work that im lying to prove im what was it "hood" and not "well-off", see when you sad you could be wrong...you are, see whatever made you go off me you need to get passed it coz either youve takem me my lyrics or somehting ive said the wrong way, coz ive never tried to be hood ever, if i say shit im joking having a laugh or its happened, if its someting like a fight or some shit, then its happened not coz im hood or go about in gangs, i dont do that no more, coz im in the wrong place at the wrong time or people got stuff against me and lots of people have got stuff against me, for shit ive done in the past, but i stoppped goin about drinking fightnig everynight after it got taken to far and seen it was pointless, and started to try do decent thing and get a job, then you still disagree i had a job or shit, why

and from now on if you goni accused me of lying or some shit back it up with proof, coz your just making yourself look like a dick
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Postby Sophie » Feb 4th, '07, 18:55

smh..ok..i forbid you 2 2 talk 2 each other :whistle:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 4th, '07, 20:54

Sophie wrote:smh..ok..i forbid you 2 2 talk 2 each other :whistle:


dont worry ;) :flower:
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