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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 12th, '07, 13:57

Verse1
money ways thats my way till my dying days
got to do what you got to do to get you money right ok
i play what i play today and say what i got to say hey
ill never fear a man on the land i stand never go bland
we should blend in whats with the divided stand
i never had a grand i never planed to stand up
then i got a mind change, gave food for though and got to much back,
now i touch track, touch and go, touch back,
never judge me coz its just me i just be what you just see
i fly free im like an eagle flee an eagle see
i eagerly await the date and slate it in my diary
the day i die i see, world peace, no hunger no racism,
then reality hit that aint the reality of it


Verse2
i rely on my strength i know ill die on the tenth
when i blow ten i know then thats when
i dont dwel i predict and tell im sudistic aswell
have you ever heard the yell of a girl getting raped
geting taped geting played all about the street
now shes about the street she lost her whole life
shes now living a ho life, that could be your life
your child life now youll think about it twice
have you been judged or is there sacrifice
a second chance at life i live for the strife
you shouldnt get judged for the shit you did
but what lived for, now thats raw



Verse3

i write you a letter but you never write back
i never lose ma temper coz i write i track
my biggest influence yes he was black
but im not tryna be that i aint fake but god judges that
i aint a cat no nine lifes for me
i get one go only good thing is its free
why do people fling it and flee
stop tyrna be what your not, talking bout the shot
youll get caught see god judges the lot
no acception no ressurections be one with karma
even though it harm-ya
stand up and face him look him in the eye
wash the tear by as he pear in your soul
are you true or fake, thats all that it take
if you can answer the question then you questioned no more
when death come a knocking you can answer the door
i dont chance no more,
so i express every feeling that a feel, n every feelings real
so keep it real with your self a keep the feeling of health
if your about in stealth you lying to yourself
you feel what im saying coz what im syaing is real



chorus is just copying pacso...yeh

audio is in audio section ( funnily enough lol )

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 12th, '07, 16:02

bump since the spammer pushed it away down >_>
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Postby Inzanity » Feb 12th, '07, 16:56

that was pretty dope, great concept, nice lyric's, good flow, that was some good shit man
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 12th, '07, 17:06

EmptyPromises wrote:that was pretty dope, great concept, nice lyric's, good flow, that was some good shit man


thanx :worship: check out the audio :happy:
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Postby sinemm » Feb 12th, '07, 17:09

agrees wit ep thats good :8)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 12th, '07, 17:10

sinemm wrote:agrees wit ep thats good :8)


thank you :flower: :flower: :worship:
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Postby C-Game » Feb 12th, '07, 19:54

nice lyrics man..ur gettin deeper daily :).. ill get da audio 2mo from ma campus.. :)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 12th, '07, 20:04

C-Game wrote:nice lyrics man..ur gettin deeper daily :).. ill get da audio 2mo from ma campus.. :)


thx man :worship: yeh i felt like a deep-ish mood today :happy:
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Postby C-Game » Feb 12th, '07, 20:08

Bar wrote:
C-Game wrote:nice lyrics man..ur gettin deeper daily :).. ill get da audio 2mo from ma campus.. :)


thx man :worship: yeh i felt like a deep-ish mood today :happy:

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