Bar - Only god can judge me

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 12th, '07, 22:55

Hoopz wrote:it ain't bad, 6.5/10.

im sorry, i wouldnt like ANYTHING on this beat. One of pac's greatest songs lol.

lol thats true :sweating:

thx for checking it man :worship:

by **B.A.D.** » Feb 12th, '07, 23:19

Bar wrote:
Hoopz wrote:it ain't bad, 6.5/10.

im sorry, i wouldnt like ANYTHING on this beat. One of pac's greatest songs lol.

lol thats true

thx for checking it man

nah... I say this was really next to it

by **$0 R3@L** » Feb 12th, '07, 23:27

^ next to pacs song? :zipped:

by **B.A.D.** » Feb 12th, '07, 23:38

^^^nah

next to 10

by **Hoopz** » Feb 13th, '07, 00:07

Oh i thought you meant it was close to as good as pacs, well check it.. for that BEAT, pac's song is a 10/10.

thats y i gave him a 6.5, i'd be proud of it

by **mart85** » Feb 13th, '07, 03:45

really good song, your flow is nice, I like your delivery, you had energy, especially in the first verse... but I think the beat is a bit too loud, especially for the chorus lol... that high-pitched synth is hurting my ears!! lol

but yeah, overall nice track, probably one of the best you've uploaded here recently :whistle:

by **randomghost** » Feb 13th, '07, 07:49

flow was hot, nice track :worship:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 13th, '07, 13:32

thx mart random n sarah :worship:

apreciate ya'll cecking it

@mart, yeh the other tracks i been working on are way above this so thats good :shifty:

lol

by **AspirinE** » Feb 13th, '07, 14:30

i liked it, more than most of ur audios...

but u still needa tweak ur flow up a bit, u stumble on ur own rhymes.
try to make ur bars only long enough to end each one of them to a bar on the beats..

As for th hook, well i personally dont believe in hooks, and that they actually matter if u wanna be an MC, so if u cant think of a hook, dont make one, ad some effect, record live action clips, to spice ur audio instead or something u got a decent mic, would would work great for you.

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 13th, '07, 20:34

AspirinE wrote:i liked it, more than most of ur audios...

but u still needa tweak ur flow up a bit, u stumble on ur own rhymes.
try to make ur bars only long enough to end each one of them to a bar on the beats..

As for th hook, well i personally dont believe in hooks, and that they actually matter if u wanna be an MC, so if u cant think of a hook, dont make one, ad some effect, record live action clips, to spice ur audio instead or something u got a decent mic, would would work great for you.

thr for checking it and the feed :worship:

ill keep it in mind :happy:

i dont get what you mean by live action clips though :sweating:

could you explain ? :sweating:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 14th, '07, 13:53

bump

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 15th, '07, 02:37

62 downloads, dont be pullin my pisser, feed :happy:

by **Inches** » Feb 15th, '07, 02:37

yooo
dont got much time to tpe, but hot ass trrack,
best i heard from u so far.
srry for bad feed

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 15th, '07, 02:38

Inches wrote:yooo
dont got much time to tpe, but hot ass trrack,
best i heard from u so far.
srry for bad feed

no problem man thx, n thx for checking :worship:

hows basketball ? :happy:

i remember you saying you got finals or something :sweating:

by **emfam** » Feb 15th, '07, 03:00

beat is nice...

hook could use some work

verses is nice.. no problem wiff em...

Delivery is good quality is decent something about it makes it iffy, but i can;t figure out what it is lol

anyways nice track man keep it up

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