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I'm kicking Lyrical Ass

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 14th, '07, 03:45

lyrics r GOOD and EVIL, SHOULD there b a SEQUAL
if we WOULD b PEOPLE, we COULD finally b EQUAL
looking 4 BETTER RYMES, some will NEVER FIND
u see PLEASURE is FINE, it's just tha MEASURE of tha CRIME
leave tha past FOREVER BEHIND, and speak 2 SEVER tha TIMES
KNUCKLES make foes BUCKLE like PRESSURE from a MOUNTAIN of TRUTH
I'm not FOLDING, I'm GOLDEN, I'm FRESHER than tha FOUNTAIN of YOUTH
u know a PERSON is HURTING 4 CEARTIN when u've STRUCK a NERVE
know yur BROTHERS from all tha OTHER MOTHERFUCKERS
I WALK PROUD whats tha TALK ABOUT I got KNOCKOUTS SUCKERS
SEND FRIENDS HUNDREDS I'll [BEN JA MEN] u DONE FED me SUPPER
I'm tha 1 that SAID I'm a HUSTLA MUST A BUSTA TOUCH THA CRUSHER
THOSE that DROP, OPPOSE THOUGHTS, thats say they won't GO 2 tha TOP
my FLOW is HOT, u say yur a emcee but we [KNOW/NO] yur NOT

[BEN JA MEN/ BEND YA MEN]
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Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 14th, '07, 19:29

U all think I'm gonna quit, look at my posts I'm still "in tha force" :whistle:

I'm gonna quietly keep dropping these dope styles so u all can sleep on me if yur that ryme tired :confusion:
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Postby D@vid » Feb 14th, '07, 19:53

ur reusing the same line in different posts cuz u think u have fire, but its just recycled shit. get over urself



but other than that i guess it was decent, not great
Life is just one big lesson
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Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 14th, '07, 21:01

Well we'll see how much fire is in yur belly when I call u out pimp
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