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300 Bars - V-Dog

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Oct 13th, '05, 22:16

300 Bars...


i'll cut ure hole body til ALL-OF-THE-SHITS-HEALING and u hurt u in so many places..ill jsut CALL-IT-A-MIXED-FEELING
i'll beat u wit EASE-CUZ-THIS-DUDE-BARLY can BREATHE-AND-JUS-MOVE..SCARY..after a SWING-TIL-HIS-GLUTES-TEARING then knock his "teeth under his head" and he aint even BELIEVE-IN-THE-TOOTH-FAIRY/
im goign to the top..i got TALENT-WHY-WAIT? ure jsut a little faggot tossing SALAD..GUYS-GAY, so i'll leave his "heart on his desk" liek its VALENTINES-DAY/ u think u HARD-BUT-YA-SOON-TA-SEE ull be SCARRED..N-ITS-DOOM-YA-DWEEBS..so watch me give u an then let u STAR-ON-LAGUNA-BEACH/
with that NAME-WHO-NEEDS-WEAPONS ure LAME-JUS-KEEP-STEPPIN..i'll take my knife.slash the BLADE-N-KEEP-STRETCHIN, then "cut this baby up" and PLAY-WITH-C'S-SECTIONS/i'll POUND-N-FRY-THIS-GAY to the GROUND-N-SLICE-HIS-FACE..n i really hate the fact that u FOUND-N-LIKE-MY-NAME.. u pm every second like "lets get DOWN-N-TYPE.U-GAME?" i accepted so i didnt have to erase that shit a THOUSAND-TIMES-A-DAY/fuck ure HEALTH-URE-GET-BURNT..TOAST i dont need HELP-FOR-THIS-HERBS-ROAST i told him he "was going down" he was like.." how ELES-DO-U-EARN-VOTES?"look faggot. next time u EVEN-SPIT-A-LINE, maybe u can get a couple eyebrows along with all the PENIS'S-U-RISE/
trust me this SAVIOR-IS-MENT to drop fire on time..my FLAVOR-AINT-RENT..but i got ure mother in bed and LAYED-HER-IMENSE..then she wanted a tip..so 9 months later i GAVE-HER-A-CENT...get it?
i got a CLAN-OF-MEAN-THUGS that COMMAND-WITH-HEAT.GUNS this MAN-IS-WEAK-HUH? well DAMNIT-SPEAK-UP cuz just add a little "flavor" and BLAM-ITS-SEASONED
i'll stick a BLADE-IN-URE-ARMPITS,and greNADES-IN-URE-CARCASS..cuz only way im "throwing in the towel" is to wipe up ure BRAINS-FROM-THE-CARPET/
ure trying to TEACH-A-GOD of HEAT?-URE-WRONG cuz i'll tatoo "timy turner on my dick" still think u can BEAT-THE-ODDS?/
yea i'm DERRANGED-WIT-A-SICK-MIND inSANE-WHEN-I-SPIT-LINES, cuz in a battle..i'd tell u to "have a ball"..but im AFRAID-THAT-U'LL-PICK-MINE/
ill leave u SOCKED-N-COVERED wit some SHOTS-MAH-BROTHER..when i DROP-LIKE-THUNDER ure blood CLOTS-N-SHUTTERS then i sever ure foot n use it as a STOCKIN-STUFFER/
i dont gotta get DRUNK-UP-IN-HIGH-SCHOOL ill just PUMP-ON-THE-NINE..COOL? til ure GUTS-N-URE-SPINE-MOVE then ill whip out my NUTS-WITH-A-SIGH-DUDE and then stick them in ure ear..thats no PUNCH..I-JUS-LIKE-TO/ i'll make sure this HEATHENS-BANDANGED..HIS-LUNGS-FRACTURED and BREATHIN-ACID-TIL-TOUNGES-SHATTERED i REACHED-N-GRABBED-IN-THIS-PUNKS-BLADDER SQUEEZED-N-DAMAGED..HIS-GUT-SPLATTERED and his BLEEDINGS-STAGNANT-N-BLOOD-GATHERES, and then pull his "brain from his nose" and have him SNEEZING-FRAGMENTS-A-MONTH-AFTER
i will CONQUER-AND-POUND-THIS-CROOK-NOW with such
MONSTEROUS-SOUNDS..IM-SHOOK-HOW? i leave, HOSTAGES-GOUGED-AND-TOOK-DOWN cuz every line u "flip is trash" like OSCAR-THE-GROUCH-AT-COOK-OUTS/im more fire then when a FLARE-SHOOTS-AND-U-STOP-AT-THE-VEIW, and my kicks.. its a PAIR-DUDE..WIT-BOMB-IN-IT-TOO,then i'll let u talk ure game..like bitch i DARE-U-TO-WALK-IN-MY-SHOES/
u'll need a RESPIRATOR-N-A-HEARST, an INVESTIGATOR-N-A-NURSE, when i REST-MAH-RAZOR-N-URE-SHIRT, n ure CHEST-IS-SHAVED-OR-LEFT-N-THIRDS, ure BEST-BIRGADES-GET-LEFT-N-BURNT, cuz i'll tlak my game..and then give u a "stare(stair) down" liek an ESCALATOR-IN-REVERSE/
im the HARDEST-WIT-THE-SHOTTY-WHORE ure left in DARKNESS-WIT-URE-BODY-TORN, cuz if u "call me ure dog" i'll shove ure fuckin CARCASS-THROUGH-THE-DOGGY-DOOR/this THUG-HERB-THINKS-HE'S-BORN-A-STAR, i'll hit ure dome-and-tear-this-stars-limbs u say "home-is-where-ure-heart-is"? then u better start fixing up that DUMPSTER-WHERE-URE-ORGANS-ARE/trust me dawg ive STOLEN-MORE-THAN-HEARTS-KID i DROVE-THE-SWORD-THROUGH-SCARRED-RIBS cuz im the BOLDEST-SORTS-WIT-HARD-HITS so fuck "callin it quits" dude was on HOLD-BEFORE-WE-STARTED/all my TERROR-HIDES-WITH-IN,to TERRIFY-N-SEND a SCARE-OR-SIGN-OF-GRIM, but when ure mother concieved u..she was liek WHERED-I-FIND-A-KID, ure hole llife was a msitake ure birth certificate reads.."ERROR..TRY-AGAIN".howcan u say that this SNITCH-IS-NOT-SERVED when i LICKED-THE-SHOTS-FIRST, and Ruthless prophecy? thats a BITCHES-SQUAD-HERB, ure crew has more "present squares" than a CHRISTMAS-CROSSWORD
i love how this GUY-IGNORES-ME and REPLIES-WIT-GORE-THEMES, DEPRIVED-N-BORING, so theres "nothing to see(c)" so of course EYE'S(I)-BEFORE-E/ his LAME-CROOK-MITE-WISH-TA-DROP a GREAT-HOOK-..WHY-YA-MISSED-IT-DAWG, my FANGS-TOOK-BITES..VICIOUS-CHOMPS..to eat u..shit ure NAME-LOOKS-LIKE-A-SHISKABOB
i hold GODS-SECRET-DIRE-STYLE ,sicker than a HOT-FEVER-WHILE-A-CHILD cuz u'd only "beat me if pigs fly"..but dont worry i canclled ure MOMS-FREQUENT-FLYER-MILES...lol
u'd "die to be this fly"? then i HUNG-URE-HEARST-HIGH cuz when the GUN-DISPERSED-I left part of ure "heart in ure eye"..just call it LOVE-AT-FIRST-SIGHT/i got VETERAN-AIM-AND i'll SEVER-URE-VEINS-DAMN u NEVER-WILL-BANG-GATS, so straight up "e's only a head" guessing the wrong LETTER-IN-HANG-MAN/ure the prodigy of some bitches..ure the GROUPIES-OF-A-WEAK-TEAM, so clear were "up on roof" like SNOOPY-WHEN-HES-SLEEPING
ill leave u DEAD-N-THEN-MAIMED-KID, wit some LEAD-N-A-STAINED-WHIP, decapitate ure ass, so INSTEAD-ITS-REPLACED-WITH, a "basketball"..like will u please get ure HEAD-IN-THE-GAME-BITCH/im READY-WHEN-THE-GUNS-CLAP a SEMI-N-I-PUMP-CAPS,gun heavy that the lead heat has MANY-GETTIN-PUNCHED-BACK its funny-when-this-clown-spits, i said put ure "money-where-ure-mouth-is" next thing i kno there was a TWENTY-ON-MY-NUT-SACK/FACE-IT-U-FAG ure too BASIC-N-BAD to STAY-WIT-A-MAN, so the BASIS-OF-THAT is to write a rap to get a senSATION-OR-CLAP where the verse is acctualyl longer than all the exPLANATIONS-U-HAVE/
u kno that V'S-HOARDS-ILL enough to leave THESE-WHORES-KILLED,i'll pound ure face into the ground til u EAT-MORE-SILT so fuck "biting the dust" bitch i made u a THREE-COURSE-MEAL..i'll TAKE-YA-LIFE next time u SAY-URE-NICE..cuz if you found out i was gonna DATE-URE-WIFE itd be a little CRAZED-BUT-I'D "leave u neck n half" n "crack ya chain" jus to BREAK-THE-ICE"cuz when this RAIDER-COMBINES-WITH a RAZOR-N-NINE-THEN, ure geting "stuck the fuck up" liek a RAPER-WIT-ICE-PICKS
this FLAVOR-SUPPLIED-IS more than our SAVIOR-SUFFICES, with such GREATER-DEVICES, ima FLAME-YA-WIT-NICENESS, such fire that "stop drop and roll" is just a DISCLAIMER-PROVIDED..yup
im not gonna FIND-YA-SOFT-CREW cuz u n ure boyfreind r datin n i i ant TRYNA-KNOCK-U,i jus said to "be ureself" n u were KINDA-LOST-DUDE, cuz u knocked on his front door in a VAGINA-COSTUME
order thinks hes good..but WHO-CARES-URE-BARS-STINK, there all USED..BARE-AND-ARNT-CLEAN, check a battle..its clear "orders more stretched" than that DUDE-WHERES-MY-CAR-SCENE...and then
i'm ILL..-VERY-INTACT-N-GREAT, to STILL-BURY-A-CAT-WIT-HASTE, since ure the dumbest-so-far" i'll punch ure "stomach-so-hard" mr PILSBURY-EJACULATES/
wats ure DREAM-TO-SCORE a winning vote that u aint CHEATED-FOR...but this battle i'll shut u out..n it aint GREED-U-WHORE, but ure gonna lose.."no option" so wats the NEED-FOR-"OR"?/
u BORE-ME-WHEN-URE-RAPPIN-G, u CORNEY-LIL-TRAMP-U-THINK,ure PORTLY-UGLY-ASS'LL-BEAT,the GOREY-THUGGIN-CHAMP-OF-HEAT? before it started. this battle was "half way home" like DOROTHY-WAS-AN-AMPUTEE/
i always got my HANDY-GAT-SPARKING cuz this MAN-HE-CAN'T-HARM-ME,i'll kill u in a parking lot..n use ure chalk outline as HANDI-CAPPED-PARKING/
u think being LAME-MATTERS?-CANT-U-SEE or are the gay thoughts overpowering this LAME-ACTORS-MAN-DISEASE, u grab a cock-cuz-ure-gay ure only "on top-of-the-game" in one of ure GAY-RAPPER-FANTASYS/
i saw him freestlying..but this KIDS-AT-REHERSAL..i SPIT-GATS-TO-HURT-U.. go GET-BACK-URE-NURSE-FOOL, cuz im gonna leave his body with "more breaks" than a KIT-KAT-COMERCIAL/
quite trying to STALL.THIS-DIKES-HATING, he only "BALLS"-WITH-GUYS-DATING. i'd lvoe to hear ure "two cents" but i dont want u to waste ALL-URE-LIFE-SAVINGS/its AMAZIN-THE-WAY-U-FAKE-SHIT, cuz sayin u aint crippled aint CHANGIN-THE-WAY-URE-MADE-KID, i tried to "talk behind ure back" but it was so crooked i ended up SAYING-IT-TO-URE-FACE-BITCH/remember when i was bigz..how i MURKED-U-..N-DAMN-SON now ure stepping up like "i'm CERTAIN-THIS-MAN-SUCKS" and wtf is D.A a bunch of WORTHLESSLY-PLANNED-THUGS? i mean your bound to find some "cheap products" when ever ure SEARCHING-THROUGH-SAMMS-CLUB/ i hope this THUG-MELTS-N-ROTS, as my GUN-PELTS-SOME-SHOTS, cuz "eye"(i) takes "u.s" of the equation like SOME-SELFISH-THOUGHTS/ure a fan..when ever i SPOKE-HE'D-STOP-N-DROOL like "what u WROTES-SO-HOT-N-NEW" ure leader gonna come? u better HOPE-HES-STOPPIN-SOON, cuz when u "speak from the soul" its just about all the VOTES-HES-GOT-URE-CREW/i'm BEATIN-URE-DAMN-CLUB,murking u so bad ure RETREATIN-BUT-CAN'T-RUN, i'm LEAVIN-MY-STAMP-SON, cuz u couldnt earn ure "mark on t.v" EVEN-IF-SAMM-SUNG ur an ANNOYING-UN-GIFTED-SINGER, a single punch can crack ure GROIN-URE-RIBS-N-FEMUR, so i'm gonna "pull an unkle samm" but this time i will POINT-A-DIFFERENT-FINGER/
i'll grab the GUN-AND-I-CALK-STEARDY cuz i kno this THUG-CAN-JUS-NOT-HURT-ME,but when i said i'll "beat u, hands down" he was like i LOVE-WHEN-U-TALK-DIRTY/u aint got the balls to beat me..IN-FACT-SOME-THINKIN-URE-NETURED, i'll "take ure life" when i BLAST-YA-STINKIN-COMPUTOR, so i will "hand "U N L" like the university of NEBRASKA-LINCOLN-RECRUITERS/
u don't have the STEEZE-TO-TAKE-THIS-FROM-ME cuz this DWEEBS-SO-FAKE-ITS-FUNNY i knew this man-was-a-queer i said to put ure "hands-in-the-air" he was like PLEASE-JUST-TAKE-MY-MONEY/Why do u roll wit a crew of some DAMSEL-FAG-MEN,TRAMPLED-HAS-BEENS, were u drinking n slurring ure words? check the end of ure name its clearly SAM-U'LL-ADD-M's/My verses STAY-WITTY-SMART-AND-RARE, to SLAY-FIFTY-HEARTS-WIT-FLARE, cuz u aint worth-my-spits-u-suk-its-true ure verse-is-shit-but-"fuck-a-poo(apu)" liek a GAY-KWIKI-MART-AFFAIR/ive SHOT-N-MARTYRD-VICTIMS, after i COCK-THE-ARMS-N-TRIGGER, cuz when ure facing "eye max (i max) its clear that i DROP-THE-LARGER-PICTURE/
so u tellin kun i fell off? like "HOMIE-HES-WACK-RITE? if ONLY-HE-HAD-LINES, about BONING-SOME-FAG-GUYS"ure just a queer thats LONELY..IN-FACT-I, think u said "i suked" cuz u RODE-ME-THE-LAST-TIME
o an ARTIST-A-GAY-STAR thinks hes gonna fight with a SPARTAN-WHO-STAYS-HARD?when ur verse is lethARGIC-WIT-LAME-BARS, well i kno its a little to real-to-feel but max u couldnt "seal the deal" if u went to the ARCTIC-TO-PLAY-CARDS,u say u wack off alot? like WOW-WATS-NEXT-CUZ? are u goonna tell me HOW-URE-TEXT-SUX? u tried to walk-wit-a-man, then pussied out and was like "talk-to-the-hand" so i asked HOW-THE-SEX-WAS? thats rite go and masturbate pussy
yea faggot..i said ure own DICKS-URE-LOVER, i'm EQUIPPED-TO-SMOTHER and RIP-U-BROTHER, beatin me? u got "maxim frontin" no wonder this BITCH-IS-"COVERED"/u wanna brawl..i'll FIGHT-U..DAMN-SON id fucking kick ure ass if i TIED-TWO-HANDS-UP, u tried to "jump-the-gun" but got stuck on the barrel..well wat-the-fuck u kno WHITE-DUDES-CAN'T-JUMP/ BLAO
this BITCH-IS-FRAIL, with his U.K CLIQUE-OF-PALES, whos SPITS-IS-STALE..i'll grab the CLIP-AND-FLAIL till ure STIFF-AS-RAILS, then i'll throw u into the ocean..maybe HIT-A-WHALE. cuz u "paying to sleep with the fish" is the only time u "TIP"-THE-"SCALES"..
trying to step to me? u'll GET-SOME-SEVERED-LEGS. have u WRECKED-SO-CHECK-URE-FATE, cuz i peeped ure tracks..and ure "cd is gay" im just here to SET-THE-"RECORD"-"STRAIGHT"/i'll put "Bars in ure ass" like im CLASHIN-RAILS, to leave u SMASHED-N-FRAIL, cuz im "walking over garbage" like TRASH-N-TRAILS, so i'll put the "beams to wade (weighed)" like old FASHION-SCALES this bastard-failed u aint LEARNING-QUICK, im BURNING-THIS with PETURBING-SPITS cuz u could have "wa turd(waiter) and he still wouldnt be "SERVING-SHIT", un earthly-scripts to EXPOSE-THIS-GEEK im a "gardener or SO-TO-SPEAK cuz i can remove ure "tulips (two lips)" and expose "ROSE(rows)-OF-TEETH ure without hose(hoes)-to-greet cuz this GEEK-IS-PLAIN-GAY..but my verse is COMPLETE-WIT-GREAT-SAVED SPEECH-THAT-AINT-LAME cuz i iant talkin bout basketball when i say the "HEAT-WILL-DRAIN(dwayne)-WADE the hole weeks-the-same-way u will SPEAK-OF-SOME-NONSCENCE that STINKS-AND-IS-NOT-FRESH,so i'll take the glock and "light up ure head" and u didnt just THINK-OF-A-CONCEPT, ure a twink-who-jus-wants-men u shouldnt try to fuck wit me cuz my LYRICALS-ILLER cuz this kids "drop dead lucky" like a CEREAL(serial)-KILLER this queer-is-all-filler yea ure TEXT-IS-ALL-GAY..N-DAMN i'll rip-this-fag cuz wat he "spits-is-ass" and i mean that in the most SEXUAL-WAY-I-CAN
i SPIT-TITE..-ITS-FANTASTIC my hunch-is-this he couldnt get a "punch-to-stick" having a FIST-FIGHT-IN-GYMNASTICS/i kno u cant STAND-IT-THAT-I'M-GREATNESS, DAMNIT-URE-JUST-FAKE-KID, he'd never own a "cover" if i HANDED-HIM-A-BLANKET, see me? bitch i'll VANISH-OR-I'll-SHAPESHIFT, cuz if ure ever "seeing dar win(darwin)" its in some PLANET-OF-THE-APE-SHIT/
when i spit BARS-SO-SICKNIN..IM-GOD'S-G..mess wit my crew? ure STARTIN-SHIT-WIT-THE-WRONG-TEAM..u'll be SCARED-N-MISSIN-URE-HEART..PLEASE...we'll flatten ure tires and have ure "ride toad (towed)" like taking too FAR-THE-KISSING-THE-FROG-THING.....smh
i'll have u FRIED-N-DEVOURED-HERB,thieres no way im TYIN-THIS-COWARDS-VERSE cuz i'll beat u to the ground till its FLYIN-AND-SHOWERS-DIRT,i'll make a bitch-subside cuz i can "strip-ure-pride" like a fucking LION-ON-HOWARD-STERN../my ILL-WRITTENS-CAN-TEAR, SHRILL-VICTIMS-IN-PAIRS,bitch better believe im STILL-SICKNESS-WIT-FLARE...so "fuck wat (D.C)" like the BILL-CLINTON-AFFAIR/ure flows as STINKY-AS-A-TAINT-CUNT ure probly THINKING-OF-SOME-LAME-PUNCH, cuz u aint-tough and ure "brain-sucks" but shit..i always thought PINKY-WAS-THE-GAY-ONE/u want to fight? i come in a HURRY..AN-AXE-N-STICK but fuck both of those..u couldnt HURT-ME-ON-ACCIDENT..u aint even WORHTY-OF-HALF-A-THIS....so i'll harass-this-bitch n have him "gassed-n-shit" looking like KIRBY-ON-LAXATIVES/im heavenly..its like i RHYME-N-GOD-FALLS, cuz my words dig deeper than a FINE-MASSAGE-YALL, rhymin wats-in-me, its from the soul..but "fuck-the-cheese" liek the GUY-FROM-DODGE-BALL/door to door harrasments of BIBLICAL-NONSCENCE..racial profiling and stereoTYPICAL-COMMENTS, these are MINIMAL-CONTENTS, SUBLIMINAL-ON-SETS that plague our world with CRIMINAL-CONCEPTS...individuals-gone-dead now DEATHS-ON-A-FAST-CLIMB..moneys getting scarce..people CHECKIN-THE-GAS-PRICE, not realizing this aint their NEXT-BUT-THEIR-LAST-LIFE, diseases growing that we dont poTECT-BUT-THEY-PASS-BY, aids is on the rise..were using SEX-AS-A-PAST-TIME...thoughts left-in-the-grass.-.why do our greatest MINDS-LIVE-IN-POVERTY..these TIMES-ARE-JUS-BOTHERING cuz people who represent the lord are spending theirs LIVES-DOING-SODOMY to SPITE-WAT-THEIR-GOD-BELIEVES... our president is stupid... i feel liek WHY-A-DEMOCRACY? the U.S.A is nothing but LIES-WHEN-THEY-TALK-TO-ME...theres no freedom of speech..these RIGHTS-ARE-A-ROBBERY its like-a-hipocracy..people in africa are STARVING-AND-SCARED and their HARDLY-AWARE that instead of giving our money were building ARMIES-TO-TEAR the weapons of mass destruction that ARNT-EVEN-THERE...democratic party-is-scare.. and now CLONING-IS-HAPPENING were playing the lord only HOPING-HIS-HAPPY...musics now just a fad..not KNOWING-WAT-RAP-MEANS taletns now determind by ure CLOTHING-AND-FLAT-SCREENS...killing animals...only-its-that-mean..slaughtering a living creatures an unTANGIBLE-SIN but fucking people are walking around in ANIMALS-SKIN..but a SCANDLE-IS-IN if u kill humans and wear them in some CANNIBAL-BINGE. so why now is this a double STANDARD-WE'LL-LIVE...forget about the mammals..-the-kid are CONFUSED-AND-SILENT..on T.V they watch people SHOOT-AND-DIE-THEN they dont think twice when they make a NUESS-AND-TIE-IT..their INDUCED-BY-VIOLENCE..its a YOUTH-DEFIANCE...everyday a childs killed..theres no USE-IN-CRYIN..its the truth-no-lyin its just a MEASURE-ENGAGED..but tis scary cuz now aday the nuclear WEAPON-IS-MADE..so when drops fall from the sky we dont kno WHETHER-IT-RAIN or some new type of acid thats BETTER-IN-AIM....and people are crashing in to towers with VETERAN-PLANES who seek destruction of peace and find PLEASURE-IN-PAIN fell liek i severed-a-vein when i try to SEEK-WAT-TRUTH-IS, but to fix the world? im too WEAK-TO-DO-THIS, cuz u can never Take anothers pain..thank the GREED-OF-HUMANS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby Shadyluva » Oct 13th, '05, 22:22

that was hottt :D :D
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lifee is GREAT
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Oct 13th, '05, 22:23

shadyluva92 wrote:that was hottt :D :D


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Re: 300 Bars - V-Dog

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Oct 13th, '05, 22:30

ShadySgurliluvu008 wrote:
V-DogDaMenace wrote:300 Bars...


i'll cut ure hole body til ALL-OF-THE-SHITS-HEALING and u hurt u in so many places..ill jsut CALL-IT-A-MIXED-FEELING
i'll beat u wit EASE-CUZ-THIS-DUDE-BARLY can BREATHE-AND-JUS-MOVE..SCARY..after a SWING-TIL-HIS-GLUTES-TEARING then knock his "teeth under his head" and he aint even BELIEVE-IN-THE-TOOTH-FAIRY/
im goign to the top..i got TALENT-WHY-WAIT? ure jsut a little faggot tossing SALAD..GUYS-GAY, so i'll leave his "heart on his desk" liek its VALENTINES-DAY/ u think u HARD-BUT-YA-SOON-TA-SEE ull be SCARRED..N-ITS-DOOM-YA-DWEEBS..so watch me give u an then let u STAR-ON-LAGUNA-BEACH/


I LUV LB lmao


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Re: 300 Bars - V-Dog

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Oct 13th, '05, 22:40

ShadySgurliluvu008 wrote:u got some funny ass lines in there lmao
cuz every line u "flip is trash" like OSCAR-THE-GROUCH

ure hole llife was a msitake ure birth certificate reads.."ERROR..TRY-AGAIN".

cuz u'd only "beat me if pigs fly"..but dont worry i canclled ure MOMS-FREQUENT-FLYER-MILES...lol :lol: :lol:



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Re: 300 Bars - V-Dog

Postby V-DogDaMenace » Oct 13th, '05, 22:44

ShadySgurliluvu008 wrote:how long did it take u 2 write all this



about 2 hrs

i g2g, ight ill prolly be back on later, ight byee
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Postby Sunni » Oct 13th, '05, 23:01

That was the shit V Dog.
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Postby TRshady » Oct 13th, '05, 23:18

Wow :shock: Never thought you'd get it done V-Dog ..
Amazing stuff, I'll definetly read through when I get the time, should get it published, very well done bro.
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Postby V-DogDaMenace » Oct 14th, '05, 00:35

Fry wrote:That was the shit V Dog.



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Postby Wendy » Oct 14th, '05, 00:43

Whoa, that's great. I should write 300 bars.
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Postby walend » Oct 14th, '05, 09:46

this BITCH-IS-FRAIL, with his U.K CLIQUE-OF-PALES, whos SPITS-IS-STALE..i'll grab the CLIP-AND-FLAIL till ure STIFF-AS-RAILS, then i'll throw u into the ocean..maybe HIT-A-WHALE. cuz u "paying to sleep with the fish" is the only time u "TIP"-THE-"SCALES"..

Heheh this is very cool, acctually everything is cool, props man !!
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 14th, '05, 12:37

Wha the hell, wasnt that supposed to be at the Rap Battles?
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Postby eminemcaparica » Oct 16th, '05, 01:28

damn propz
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Postby egyemtee » Oct 24th, '05, 01:41

speechless PROPZ
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 24th, '05, 12:39

You know the nigga lost the battle actually. All his stuff was either stolen or pre-written :p
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