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Postby Flamez » Feb 24th, '07, 06:35

pretty good verse maybe :8) i like it...
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 24th, '07, 19:42

kool verse.....match to the remix very good :8) :flower:
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Postby JMG » Feb 25th, '07, 07:58

im sorry most of it dosent even rhyme
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Postby Enimee » Feb 25th, '07, 08:00

see this is why u wont make it no where anytime any how

cuz 1 u suck
and 2 u cant take constructive critisicm

wtf dude if u wud chill out u cud excel bigtime im 4 real on that
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Postby JMG » Feb 25th, '07, 08:02

its not critasism its an insult
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Postby Ethos » Feb 25th, '07, 08:03

Jmgeezy wrote:its not critasim its an insult


why are you gonna make an insult on maybe?
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Postby JMG » Feb 25th, '07, 08:04

no he insulted me im not insultin him
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Postby Enimee » Feb 25th, '07, 08:05

lol ull learn ull learn
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Postby Enimee » Feb 25th, '07, 09:00

Lol @ sarah
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Postby Flamez » Feb 25th, '07, 09:02

:shakehead: Jmgeezy X_X
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 25th, '07, 15:32

Enimee wrote:see this is why u wont make it no where anytime any how

cuz 1 u suck
and 2 u cant take constructive critisicm

wtf dude if u wud chill out u cud excel bigtime im 4 real on that


look whos talking :laughing:
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Postby Enimee » Feb 25th, '07, 18:29

yeah i feel u bar :P
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 26th, '07, 02:01

McMaybe wrote:ok jizm-jeezy or whatever....i love beef, so if you wanna start it, i guerentee to make you cry


number 2 - your the worst artist i ever read, you suck, you cant rhyme, your simple minded, and an autistic retard...lmao....now, start cussing at me....since you cant respond in a civil, smart way


wouldnt waste my time man,guys obviously got too much time on his hands and not alot of brains.
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Postby JMG » Feb 26th, '07, 04:00

go head and talk shit on a messege board dosent make u hard and go head and diss my rhymes ill remember to diss the fuck out of u on my cd that will go platnuim
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 26th, '07, 04:02

Jmgeezy wrote:ill remember to diss the fuck out of u on my cd that will go platnuim


unless u mean some sorta town in usa i cant see that happening ;)
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