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Postby ines » Oct 24th, '05, 14:11

lovely to read and gr8 work too.gives me inspiration to try it by myself
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Postby ines » Oct 24th, '05, 14:19

my pleasure.if it is god i say it and if it is bad i say it too, but this was really good and lovely to read it.
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 24th, '05, 19:22

Sumthin more gangsta next time. I cant stand this kind of rhymes.
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Postby HAYZI » Oct 24th, '05, 19:29

ignore em theres a hell of a lot more to rap than gangsta, nice shit bruv ;)
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 24th, '05, 20:10

No need to diss me dawg. I just cant feel ya man, that's all.
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Postby HAYZI » Oct 24th, '05, 20:12

Em_Young wrote:No need to diss me dawg. I just cant feel ya man, that's all.




*shakes head yet again*
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 24th, '05, 20:14

Why ya shaking ya head nig? You got a headache or sumthin? :whistle:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Oct 24th, '05, 20:25

em young man stop the hattin.....this tune was ill man!!!

if you so gangsta em why you here now? you should be out killing people now..... (edited quote from em)

i aint dissing ya just saying keep it real.the g thing is kewl but too much is fucking depressing.Theres always a space for creativity.I mean check 50's latest stuff, well ok dont that shit far to bitchy :happy:
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 24th, '05, 20:37

Hey when u wanna quote sumthin, do it right. Secondly, i aint asking your opinion, if you think an O.G. would kill people 24/7 then you damn stupid.

A hustler has no right to chill in him home? A hustler has no right to skim through some sites? A hustler has no right to lean back and listen to some music? Dont tell me shit man. People are more than hustlers and gangstas.
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Postby $0 R3@L » Oct 24th, '05, 20:41

my remix verse to this joint by my man g killa (hope you dont mind dawg)

i cant get up, i cant even put on my clothes
these drugs done got me shagged out like one of these hoes
ive done grown up in a hood where you cant have ice
you got anything nice it be gone by the time you blink twice
im a white man out numberd in my hood by a hundred to one
only white friend ive ever had was the strap for my gun
one time on the streets we done robbed a kid
robbed the money out his pockets and out of the other kid he was with
nah i cant let up, i gotta do it for my hood
nah i cant get up, cus i be feeling like i should
man this kid was only nine but you gotta be ruthless
messing around will leave you shot up ,beat up and even toothless
never told my girl how i love her,never visited cloud nine
only time i say i love her is when im high as a kite :smoking:
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 24th, '05, 20:44

Too Gangsta 4 Radio. Kinda mediocre tho. G_killa's shit was good. Your's was too wannabe gangsta.
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Postby $0 R3@L » Oct 24th, '05, 20:48

but you see every word was truthful em.Just cus i post on a forum dont mean this shit here aint real.I aint saying im gangsta....if your percieve my words as sounding gangsta/wannabe gangsta then thats on your side not mine ...thanks for the response ,props.
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Postby $0 R3@L » Oct 24th, '05, 20:51

yo thanks g killa, just your words were kinda similar to my life.

fucked up street life and a girl who i left and i wish now i hadnt.that was my biggest mistake and also never telling her i love her. :'(
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 24th, '05, 20:54

Yo that means i can remix too?
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Postby $0 R3@L » Oct 24th, '05, 20:59

shit dawg,it probably sounds like im chatting like a bitch but, it fucking hurts dude.....like they say you dont know what ou got till its gone :'(
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