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Postby stevethetruth » Feb 28th, '07, 04:46

I just wanna be known not nationally full blown
Being put in that zone would set me in attack mode
I don
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Postby stevethetruth » Feb 28th, '07, 15:22

22 views and not one feed .....ok :sweating:
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Postby Flamez » Feb 28th, '07, 15:31

nice steve :8) liked this..
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Postby stevethetruth » Feb 28th, '07, 17:51

thanks :)
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Postby C-Game » Feb 28th, '07, 18:05

steverocks88 wrote:22 dates and not one girl .....ok :sweating:


really??????????????
y not???????

...and good rhymes steve-o
is this for a song
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Postby stevethetruth » Feb 28th, '07, 18:29

lmao good one c game

umm most likely yeah but i'll probably fix em up even better before i record ...and i will be posting this verse i wrote in class today later (just a head's up)
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Postby stevethetruth » Mar 1st, '07, 02:23

well 58 veiws and only two feeds.....come on now :tounge2:
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Postby D@vid » Mar 1st, '07, 02:28

what do u want. its better than anything i can do, so why does my opinion matter. not to be harsh, but i think u know this neways, but it isn't that great. def work on it, i know i've seen what i think to be better shit from u. so if ur gonna record it, def work with it a little and make it flow a little better.




not to start a big discussion on this again.but i would give feed to ppl but i dont think my opinion really matters. as long as ur into it, then go with it. music is for urself, not for others to fully pick apart, but i do understand asking for feedback. i just dont think that im the right person to give it, if that made any sense :sweating:
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Postby stevethetruth » Mar 1st, '07, 02:39

bestestever202005 wrote:so if ur gonna record it, def work with it a little and make it flow a little better.


that's all i'm asking for is some construtive critisim :worship: thanks lol


and i'll be more patient no more bumping for me :zipped: :sweating:
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Postby D@vid » Mar 1st, '07, 02:40

steverocks88 wrote:
bestestever202005 wrote:so if ur gonna record it, def work with it a little and make it flow a little better.


that's all i'm asking for is some construtive critisim :worship: thanks lol


and i'll be more patient no more bumping for me :zipped: :sweating:



naw man, its cool i just needed to know what ur lookin for and whether if my opinion really matters that much. and now i know, and that it does, so i will try to help u out when i can
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Postby stevethetruth » Mar 1st, '07, 02:49

ok cool lol thanks :)
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Postby Cory Matthews » Mar 1st, '07, 03:48

ur good as hell
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Postby stevethetruth » Mar 1st, '07, 03:53

Cory Matthews wrote:ur good as hell

haha thanks man :happy:
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