one of my best verses ever ( i think )

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i wrote this for a track ( its unreleased not even recorded yet ) but i think its got to be one of the best verses i ever wrote, so just wanted to post it to see what ya'll thought


a remember back then when i couldnt ryhme nor do a bar flow in time
now i go and shine this flow is mine, with all the might i can get
im like nas, all i need is one mic i could stand above the hype
understand i love the type of rapper, that dont care about money or cars
they just spit hot bars like the shits hot tar, the do it for the music
i give them respect for staying on subject when the rest got wrecked
why live then detect your straying gone direct then he test spot reflect
that hip hop is infected real talent rejected im a gallant affected
with the poison the poise-on the people this is to steeple
i keep it real on every track cry deep spit heal gone carrie that
music is my life n i know that


i aint posted lyrics in a while so be nice and leave me feed

anywae i like the mix of simplicity and complexity , i been trying hard to balance it out since asp gave me the heads up lol

[JMG]

that hip hop is infected real talent rejected im a gallant affected

best line cuz its true hip hop is infected

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that hip hop is infected real talent rejected im a gallant affected

best line cuz its true hip hop is infected

yeah, with people like you, that cant rap for shit

roflmao

thx man

[yoshi]

all the multies seem cool.. dunno if it's your best one [can't remember them all right now lol ] but it's definitely good