Put Tha Beef Aside And Read This, Plz Feed It

[Rain Matrix]

my Broken Life, Spoken Like I'm Devoting Type, 2 Provoking Fights
His Worries became Miseries Mysteries, just History Wrote In Spite
a Boss Dies Full Throttle, at 7 I Lost My Role Model, it was All Down Hill
Rap With Me 4 tha Tradgedies, cuz my Small Town Will Crawls Now Still
remember my Flow This Time, Poets Ryme, Tho It's Mine, I'm Taken Back
caught in Shaping That Forsaken Fact, I feel like a junkie Making Tracks
this Rebels Direct, even if I Get No Respect, I'll still Level Text
people Settle Bets, so Debts Will Rest, I rap like tha Ghetto's Check
I felt Dented, but I had Incentive, so I stayed Relentless and Attentive
this Eighties Baby has been Crazy Lately, like I Invented Demented

...If I keep rapping like this I will make it

[Rain Matrix]

Thanx fo giving me way 2 many ideas

my goal is not 2 get my multi's out there but to add perspective 2 tha rap we all percieve

[Enimee]

yo ur shit is on a whole nother level now mad propz on dis man

[Kez]

This is fucking hot shit here

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

nice flow..liked this one
keep it up like that

[$0 R3@L]

work on the audios now,no one ever got signed for typing raps.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

no if you keep "typing" like that you wont get signed

you still dont understamd audio n text is a whole dfferent ball game, start learnigng to flow, like what people were tryna help you with but you threw it back in there faces

[Rain Matrix]

Thanx all of u, I'm sorry 4 trippen out over tha audio thing I will get back 2 that ASAP believe that I still got a trick or 2 left

[C-Game]

nice multies and stuff
and da best thing abt it is dat it flows really well
some times it goes a lil over syllables
but it wld work out once u edit wen u do it to a beat

good stuff bro