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Feedin the block

Postby Cory Matthews » Feb 4th, '07, 08:00

verse 1

I cant sleep its past midnight ,
topanga's been callin me cheap cuz moneys been tight,
wonderin where shawn and feeny have gone,
tryin to be strong dont no where i went wrong,
it stinks how time flys in the blink of an eye,
bleedin inside breathing but why,sceamin to fly proceedin to die,
the towns got the best of me, every cop around has aressted me,
my dreams vanished just like that, now im feedin feanes just a man in black,

chorus



the feans are hungry they got a appatite

im feedin the block

,just come to me cuz i got plenty crack 2nite

im feedin the block

u wanna live free u got alot on ur mind yeah pot is fine

im feedin the block

but i can help u stop time with the drop of a dime

im feedin the block



verse 2

never was the man to back down grew up nice but im sellin crack now
i met the world and it dosent like me like the rest so i hold my pistol tightly till death, and slightly to the left cuz i can feel em creepin up on me,
but im deep in this army and ur to fuckin weak to harm me,
i lost my mind but i still i learned u either feed or be fed,
cuz if u cross that line u could bleed and be dead,
if i could start over i would reset,but my parts over so god bless


chorus

verse 3

wont let no one tell me whats best for my life or how to live it,
dont respect no one except for my wife buts its been a minute,
since we shared a vow my family and friends were here but where are they now,
no where to be found thought they be here but there no where around,
and to the fenes im another stress healer but to the rest im another death dealer,
but life aint easy and my wife needs me the world is to greedy,
girls are gettin sleezy livin freely i just hope u never see me like this mr feeny,
cuz turnin out like this is what i never wanted but from what i seen so far in this game im forever haunted

chorus
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Postby sinemm » Feb 4th, '07, 11:53

well i liked it..some good n deep lines there..good job..keep it up.. :)
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Postby Cory Matthews » Feb 4th, '07, 20:15

its just my life
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Postby Inches » Feb 4th, '07, 20:50

Boy Meets World Wanan Be
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Postby stevethetruth » Feb 6th, '07, 02:34

Inches wrote:Boy Meets World Wanan Be
:laughing:

hey that show was awesome :laughing:
http://www.myspace.com/stevethetruth <-- my myspace add me!!
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Postby Infliction » Feb 6th, '07, 05:48

it was aiight but it seems like ur a mix of akon and young jeezy's lives cuz some of the lines sound similar, i mean are you really a crack dealer? It wunt bad im jus sayin' if its not true dont say it, not sayin it aint tru jus callin you out on it to see if it is
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Postby Inches » Feb 7th, '07, 01:40

steverocks88 wrote:
Inches wrote:Boy Meets World Wanan Be
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hey that show was awesome :laughing:


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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 7th, '07, 02:29

plaspp wrote:it was aiight but it seems like ur a mix of akon and young jeezy's lives cuz some of the lines sound similar, i mean are you really a crack dealer? It wunt bad im jus sayin' if its not true dont say it, not sayin it aint tru jus callin you out on it to see if it is


im guessings hes coccoa :shifty:
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Postby Cory Matthews » Feb 7th, '07, 04:45

try me nigga
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Postby Inches » Feb 9th, '07, 02:05

^ yup it is him
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Postby Cory Matthews » Mar 1st, '07, 07:48

I aint no hot chocolate
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Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 1st, '07, 07:58

Rain says... I never met a crack dealer afraid 2 swear :shifty:
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Postby Cory Matthews » Mar 1st, '07, 08:00

what gives u that idea nigga
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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 1st, '07, 11:30

wow
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Postby Infliction » Mar 23rd, '07, 06:06

its not that hes afraid to swear, hes sayin N - I - G - G - A and that gets starred out here
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