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Writing New Song

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I'm dissing someone, Guess Who

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Writing New Song

Postby Kojack » Mar 24th, '07, 19:19

Northside Drama, Syndicate Hustla
Crosstown Gangsta rapper, tears when i gun play out
3.57, my new area code
blocks of flats, only 12 floors
I'm in a project theme, when my team grow up
we say hello, to your little, fake, gansta rap
And that's all, only a little preview
To my homie ****** Rest in Peace Dude

    We make your life End
    Till i come out, you can play wit my Gems
    We make your life End
    Till my glock wilds, you have time to get the fuck away

Make this so Quick, imma ninja rapper
i slap you bitch, till you say butter
i think i just said butter, but i forgot he fly
You a butterfly thug, Shit happens, you'll die
*** or fai, *** or lure
you a failure, this is sumthin' i can prove
I can do jobs, you can't even imagine
I can manage to get you in the prison, or i might get you die

    We make your life End
    Till i come out, you can play wit my Gems
    We make your life End
    Till my glock wilds, you have time to get the fuck away


FUCK YOU

PS. i added some stars where the name of the person who gets dissed by me is, this is not the number of the letters of the name who gets dissed by me
Last edited by Kojack on Mar 24th, '07, 19:23, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 24th, '07, 19:20

wack!
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Mar 24th, '07, 19:21

I can manage to get you in the prison

SnITCHH!!111!!
Its legendary status sittin behind this computer wiigga
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Postby Kojack » Mar 24th, '07, 19:24

you know what i'm saying
it is a figure of speech
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Re: Writing New Song

Postby Sophie » Mar 24th, '07, 19:24

Kojack wrote:
imma ninja rapper


:laughing: im sorry it made me laugh. it was the only bit i saw :whistle:
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Postby Kojack » Mar 24th, '07, 19:25

Thank you

it is so wack cause i'm refering to a wack rapper

it's not you :D :D :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 24th, '07, 19:39

so your snitchin..with wack lyrics and a pussy coz your scared ot say there name...:laughing:
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Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 24th, '07, 19:46

is This Yur Diss Hurry, I'm Mister Fists Flurry, it's no Mystery Quit Bitching
yur a Waste Of Time, u've never Faced A 9, all of yur History It's Ficition

Go Back Kojack Know That No Gat Flows Rap, shut tha fuck up, Facts Stop This Tradgedy
this Jackoff Kid, is a Wack, Soft, Bitch, we know I could make him Stack Losses Avidly
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Postby IceAxe » Mar 24th, '07, 19:55

^ that killed what Kojack wrote.

im guessin it's me you're goin at
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Postby Flamez » Mar 24th, '07, 20:08

lmao i love internet disses :p
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Postby Kojack » Mar 24th, '07, 20:09

yes ice fuck it's you
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Postby IceAxe » Mar 24th, '07, 20:12

you're such a fucking loser
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Postby Sophie » Mar 24th, '07, 20:14

then why not just say its him in the song if your gonna say it anyways jeez
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Postby Flamez » Mar 24th, '07, 20:14

lmao i just read that but..wack lol
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Postby stevethetruth » Mar 24th, '07, 20:19

ummm .... wack o matic!!!!!!!!
http://www.myspace.com/stevethetruth <-- my myspace add me!!
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