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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 00:26

:sweating:

btw this is not intended to nobody..just something i wrote first thing that came to mind :sweating:

fuckin' bitches pussy cunts fuck all ya'll fuckin' haterz
wishin' death upon me when i'm a powerful lyrical dictator
unique lyrical creator fuckin' you haterz up leavin' you dead
hate me keep talkin' shit to me homo fags go right ahead
i'll blow your fuckin' head off don't stop say what you gon' say
spray it in my fuckin' face let out your angry rage before you decay
don't play these games around me or i'll swear to take your life away
no matter the day or who's watchin' you better keep yo mouth shut
no guts no glory bitch you better come prepared before i crush your nuts

:sweating: feedback appreciated..
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Postby sinemm » Mar 29th, '07, 00:42

are you tryin to count the curses you know?

you say they hateyou but you make hate here n dont see

stop those stuff

theres lot more stuff round than this

tho the lines werent bad
jus too much hate and curses in it
u will never get me but anyway
that wut i could say
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Postby stevethetruth » Mar 29th, '07, 00:44

someone sounds piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiissed :zipped:

and i agree on what sinem said
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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 00:45

ahhh i just said this isn't intended to nobody lol i just wrote this for the heck of it cuz i was bored..

lol i wasn't even mad when i wrote this i was just bored singing an eminem song so i just wrote this really :sweating:
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Postby stevethetruth » Mar 29th, '07, 00:53

were you listening to kim?? :laughing: :p
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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 00:54

steverocks88 wrote:were you listening to kim?? :laughing: :p


lmao how'd you know :sweating: thats why when i wrote this all this came to mind lmao..
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Postby stevethetruth » Mar 29th, '07, 01:01

KB24 wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:were you listening to kim?? :laughing: :p


lmao how'd you know :sweating: thats why when i wrote this all this came to mind lmao..

idk just a hunch lol
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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 29th, '07, 01:43

you have a bad case of boy versus world syndrome.
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Postby Flamez » Mar 29th, '07, 02:51

$0 R3@L wrote:you have a bad case of boy versus world syndrome.


lmao didn't i just say i was bored and was intended to no one, i just wrote this cuz didn't know what to write about lol :sweating:
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